If I fall, will you catch me?
If I trip, will you help me up?
If I stumble, will you break my fall?
If I spill my life to you,
Will you share yours?
If my heart breaks,
Will you put the pieces back together?
If I fall for you,
Will you catch me?
This poem is just me using my imagination, meaning its not really real. I just pictured a couple together and put words together...[and so far it is the shortest poem I've ever done...weird lol.] Anywho, let me know what you think, please!!
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thanks guys!!! x) And will do!!!
I like this poem, but I do have a few suggestions...
I think that this is a good poem talking about what people fear and wonder before going into a relationship... Although the statement "If I fall, will you catch?" is kinda overused, you use it well here...
~Rain~
That's a nice poem.
I don't think you really need the comma after "fall". The line break already supplies the pause there.
I like this part. It really helps get your point across in this poem.
And as for the fact that you used your imagination for this, good job!
I like it I really do i think this is a wonderful poem.