In my mind,
Bubbles are floating in the sky,
Continuously.
In my mind,
The grass is orange;
The leaves, gold;
The trunks, green;
And the clouds pink.
In my mind,
The sky is still blue,
And the sun,
Still yellow.
In my mind,
Everyone is unmasked,
And seen clearly through their lies.
In my mind,
No one can hide
What they really feel inside.
In my mind,
Dragons are better,
Than vampires.
In my mind,
I'm a dragon rider.
And my dragon is silver,
With blue eyes.
In my mind,
Love is unpossessible;
Not one man can "control" it.
In my mind,
Love unlocks our hearts
Willingly.
In my mind,
Everyone dances
In the rain
When they're troubled,
But no one catches a cold.
In my mind,
Life is a gift,
Never a curse.
In my mind,
My world is perfect.
Why can't life be like it is
In my mind?
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Thanks guys! :] I was really unsure about this poem.
Thanks, you both encouraged me. :]
-BG-
hello, it's me again.
as usual, i love your poems. in this one, i love the details, and the vivid illustration of what is inside your mind.
it's very imaginative and colorful, i think.
-telle.
You never seem to let me down Babygirl. Another great poem
. If only the world could be as we wanted it to, but if your looking for change then you are looking for enemies as well. Its hard shape thing the way you want to without angering some one. Its no secret that the vast majority is masked, love is rare, and 15 year girls made vampires better then dragons. Yet if we could live our lives through our mind we would be insane! However I am a dragon ride and it is sliver.
Your fan
-Dawn