I scream into the azure ocean, but all I see is bubbles, bubbles everywhere –
my nostrils flare, my eyelids flash brilliant orange: burning bubbles, I bleed bubbles.
they wander skywards, fluorescent bobbing, bumping, smashing.
Zenith of willful beaks and shattered egg, they crack the surface
and pop
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I feel like this was really deep. God writing, I like the words you used. Everyone forgets there are different types of blue.
I thought this was really good.
The only thing I really noticed out of place was the "and pop" at the end. I'm not a big reviewer for Poetry, but I thought that this piece was really good. 
Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see more from you. 
Keep Writing!
--Jalmoc