Hello, StormAroundMe,
Lümhan here for a quick sneek-peek.
First of all, I quite like your poem. It's simple.
I have a doubt though; who is 'he?'
If it's being referred to God or Jesus it has to be capitalized. Be careful with the punctuations.
Keep writing and have faith in the Lord.
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