Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review.
I have to say, this was an amazing poem. Why have I not seen any of your works before?
I love the way you talk about 'her', all of awe and admiration. The imagery and hyperbole really gave a great touch to the poem.
I love rhyming poems, most of the poems I write rhyme. However, not many people write with rhyme due to its sometimes-impossible parameters, so thank you for rhyming this. I don't mean to say that free verse poems are bad, they have their own beauty.
I have no idea why, but I simply love this line:
Hers was a pain and a steel will to fight.
It's just perfect.
Anyway, this was perfectly pulchritudinous poetry.
Keep Writing!
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