Hey there, Beany! Here's a tiny review for your tiny poem!
So, I think that this poem is about Natalia, Oma, or Onkle Peter. Why Onkle Peter? No idea! It doesn't even mention the you-know-whats!
I really like he repetition of "darkness" and light," but I'd like to see you expand upon them and increase the length.
Have a nice [Insert time of day here*]!!!
Love ya, Beany! <3
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