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Good job! I think this applies to a lot of things. It reminds me of how one of my friends became a completely different person in just a couple weeks, and I thought "When did this happen? Could I have helped?" There's nothing I can really say on the critique side of things. I just love this poem. Thank you.
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Hey there! MapleWay here with a review!
This was a cool little poem! It was a little short which ended up being a negative as well as a positive. I also liked the overall feel. It was fun and peaceful. There was lots of great imagery as well! I didn't completely get the beginning. Is the reader the cloud? Or is this a typo. Was it supposed to be it? Anyways great poem!
Thanks for the review! No typo, just checked again. It's meant to be "I" as in the speaker. Is it confusing? ;-;
Your welcome! And now that I look at it again I see that.
Ah, okay
Also congrats on making the literary spotlight!
Thank you c:
Hey, Stringy-bean! c:
I panicked at first cause short but I can do this! c: This is a unique, tiny poem that was very pleasing to they eye. Short, sweet, concise. It's well-worded and organized. Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!! c:
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Thanks!