Dark Raven

I loved it sis!!! It was absolutely wonderful. Keep up the great job!!!

Thanks for the review ^^ I'll fix it lols this is sooo long ago I'm surprised I still have it somewhere thought I had tossed it

Hi! I like your poem alot! Soulful, In one word. Here's a nitpick! lol

Soulkana wrote:Dark Raven

In the Darkness, - you've already described the raven as dark - don't say darkness again. Try something like 'dense black'
A light appears,

I run and run but it never comes closer

Then I realize that it is nothing more then an than an illusion

I am a raven, to be exact - we already know he's a raven - unessasary information.

Locked in a cage, hoping for freedom

In - under would sound better - the cloak of the night, I shall fly away

Someday, free as the wind, never looking back at the past - I think you should scrap this last bit -" and the darkness"
Be free Dark Raven,

You shall find peace in the night

Into the night - perhaps use gloom, or black...

A raven flies free

On the sight a dove joins on the flight - you've used on twice here..eek...better put :"A dove swoops beside" or something like that;
A crow joins on (Don't need on) the journey

On the quest they shall be free