When Innocence Dies ~ Chapter 8

by Sorsha2

Published December 11, 2008

In Vampire Serires (book#1)

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ashleylee wrote a review Review · Dec 14, 2008

Sorry, Sorsha, that it has taken me so long to get to this. But hopefully my review is still of some use.

Hands ripped open the neck of Louise’s coat, fingers skimmed along the column of her throat; the demon moved to latch her mouth just above Louise’s laboring chest, but the shimmer of light caught her eye and interest.


I think you mean “in interest” instead of “and interest”

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Oh, Sorsha, I’m greatly disappointed that you won’t be posting further chapters than this. Leaving me at such a moment… Ug… But I guess I will just have to deal with it *shrugs* :D

As usual, it was wonderful. I wish you the best of luck in completing this and if you ever have any questions, send me a PM and I’ll be happy to help.

Keep on Writing!



The only person I know for certain I am better than is the person I used to be.
— CandyWizard