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Hey Ashleylee, sheesh you move quickly
lol
One thing I thought I should mention, most of this book has already been written, I am just copying and pasting from the document so a few of hte pointers you made have not been updated in the central document but I am trying to work through them slowly. Unfortunately I haven't had much time for editing so if you continue to see it in hte next couple of chapters, then thats why
I will PM you soon.
~ Sorsha
Chapter six review on it's way!
Comma after "sorry"
Comma instead of a period after "Please" and a small "h" on "he"
Should be "note" instead of "not"
Should be a comma instead of a period after "answers"
Comma instead of a period after "real"
Comma instead of period after "yeah"
Another awesome chapter, Sorsha! Wow, that was really good!
Have no other complaints. Just PM me when you post more