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this is back? yessss, this is back!

Tis the season to remember this wonderful YWS piece of history. @Snoink

This was hilarious! Oh boy, where do I start? Is it the fact that Bella’s love (excuse me, obsession) is on point? Or the fact that the Author (whoever they are) is a different person? Maybe how Snoink’s declaration of being a lizard brought tears to my eyes? Or how this is a far superior, more meaningful plot than Twilight ever could be? This Halloween story was so lovely, so amazing, that it brings Halloween itself to shame. Great job. I wish you a wonderful day free of Edward Cullen and Bella Swan.

oh wow

Loved it!

"WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS." was my favorite part along with. "OH MY GOSH, I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN HEART HEART LOVE LOVE ALL MY SOUL HEART LOVE EDWARD CULLEN." Made me laugh so hard, and it probably doesn't help that I'm on a sugar high. LOVED IT!!! So happy I found this, can't wait to read what your write next.

Carpe diem,
LUNARGIRL

For anyone wondering, let's just say it was a different time.

This is certainly a classic and I am glad to have discovered it while browsing through the delights of "2008 YWS". I'm hoping more people can appreciate it over this Halloween holiday season.

Does anyone know why this doesn't appear in the 100 YWS Spotlight Works of All Time though? If works prior to 2009 don't show up, what other gems are hiding out there? I'm very curious...


Really, this piece has not aged a bit - the line about Bella continually yelling "I'M CLUMSY" is hilarious - it cracks me up every time I read it.

Well done!

WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.

XD

I have no words for this.

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD You two.

OMG! I was literaly on the floor laughing.
*My dad enters the room.* "You need to quiet down."
xD You get a gold star, but if it were in my power, you would recieve twenty.

Epic! Utterly epic! It literally had me rolling on the floor laughing my brains out while my sister watched me and debated whether or not to get help!

And CRAIG FERGURHSON! I LOVE HIM! Too bad he was petrified but hey HE WAS THERE!!

Plus, I loved the sugar hysteria and everything falling on Bella E-P-I-C F-U-N-N-I-N-E-S-S!

Your awesome! -Irish

LMAO!
I can't pick a fave part...
They were all just that hilarious...
**stars**
Epic win, m'dear.
Flute Loops

Genius. Totally genius. I love how you mutilated Bella; I always hated her. And the plot is SO better than Twilight's. You guys are brilliant. Thanks for making me smile.

I get it.
You be a lizard.

BELLA: OH MY GOSH, I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN HEART HEART LOVE LOVE ALL MY SOUL HEART LOVE EDWARD CULLEN.

<Antartica falls on Bella>

*rolls around floor laughing*

Man i wish i was there!!

Hello! I've already given you a star. Have another!
Having read Twilight, this has become hillarious on a whole new level. But I am in love with Edward.

Anyway - bring on a Christmas version! With more Bulbasaur, of course

OMG! That was my birthday! Ridiculous! Why didn't I read this before!

I love it SO MUCH! (I'm talking in ALL CAPS not screaming!)

Favorite Part: PENGUIN ATTACK

OH NOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Definitely gold star!

~jumper

This has 42 stars, a record i must say.


---Jon---

*gives script to Drama Club*

We'll tell you how it turns out.

summergrl13 wrote:Don't get confused now Snoink. You're not a lizard; just look at your avatar, it's a pig!

Clearly, candy makes people believe themselves to be lizards... but mostly it makes Snoink believe that.

Well, I have to say that Bella is pretty well summed up in this script. Can't really get more descriptive than, "I'M CLUMSY!"

Great job Snoink. Again!

0(o.o)0

Hm.

Decent.

Got distracted and watched "who's on first" on youtube. Yeah.

Don't get confused now Snoink. You're not a lizard; just look at your avatar, it's a pig!

Clearly, candy makes people believe themselves to be lizards... but mostly it makes Snoink believe that.

Well, I have to say that Bella is pretty well summed up in this script. Can't really get more descriptive than, "I'M CLUMSY!"

Great job Snoink. Again!

0(o.o)0

*Falls into fits of helpless giggle snorts* Awesome!!!!!!

Antarctica falls on BELLA

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that seriously killed me!!!!!!
I`m gonna go crash into a tree now!!!
(Psstt!!! that meant she liked it!!)

LOL that was hilarious! Everything that fell on Bella made me laugh! Antartida, that was a great one! Not screaming just capital letters xD

My favorite part was:

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>

SNOINK: Ooooooooh. It’s Christmas time! SHINY.

I really like the detail you put in the script and also the charters in the script it was very good for your age and also keep writting i really like reading this piece and i really enjoy it too.

very good i like it and i like the charters in the script kepp wriitng

*Rolls eyes* This was so random yet so funny.

I loved how you made fun of Bella.

Weeeee ballerina!!! Hahahahahahahah.

Good job.

Nariel

*GOLD STAR*

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>


EPIC WIN!


(and I was shouting by the way)


Edit: You know what I find interesting? That the part that most people (like me) found funniest is actually from the book.

Wow, you just made my day. It was so random, but in a good way.

WHY ARE WE YELLING?
WE'RE NOT. WE'RE JUST TALKING IN CAPITAL LETTERS.

That has to be my favorite part.

OMG! That was hilarious. Everyone was looking at me like I was crazy.
*sniffs* you just HAD to make fun of Bella.
You could so make a career out of making movie spoofs.

...And here I was wondering what Snoinkus thought of Twilight....



GO Edward!!! * Dazzles *

Random Kittens !!!

See Snoink---you love kitties after all!!!!!!!!!!


Can we have a Christmas special too and a everyday special episode!

My dad told me to shut up, because it's late and I was laughing so loud, it woke up my little brother. That was the funniest thing since my best friend ran into a locker On the first day of school.
Love it, love it!!!!!!!!!! LOL

I loved edward going "I MUST PROTECT HER" That was just stephenie meyer perfect! Great great great!

I wish my mad mind could be as creative as yours
"I'm a ballerina" weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Liked it mucho
Sarah
xxx

I fell out of my chair, I was cracking up so hard. I love the parts where Bella declares herself clumsy and something falls on her....

Its GREAT

I don't know what to say. But you get a gold star! Yay

Only third?

This is the third most popular piece on YWS since we started doing gold stars? Goodness...

Haha . How dare Bella and Edward make fun of your story Snoink. It's better than theirs...

It's truly amazing . Nobel-Prize winning stuff.

-Stel x

Don't abuse caps. I'll come after you.

Oh. My. Gosh.

<Edward scintillates>

Too.Much.Laughter.Cannot.Breathe.
*face turns red, then blue, then purple*
I agree with EmmaSweetie!
Excellent Job!
You get a gold star

I loved it!!!!!!!! ahh even though i am a twilight fan, it was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*jumps to feet and applauds*

I just had to read this out loud to my sister. It was wicked. Wicked awesome. We were rolling. On the floor.

--Anna

O_O


*bursts out laughing*

LOL That WAS SO FUNNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Srsly?

Hey wait a minute....your makign fun of Twilight! *points accusing finger at writers*

Oh well.....it was FUNNY!

toodles, jen!

I just cried from laughing so hard.

That has never happened before.

*dies of laughter*

I hereby award you: 1 internet.

Use it wisely.

EPIC WIN.

Two words: LOVE IT. It's pure genius.

Fav part:

Snoink wrote:
EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>

SNOINK: Ooooooooh. It’s Christmas time! SHINY.

EDWARD: I MUST PROTECT HER!

SNOINK: I MUST PROTECT... YOUR FACE!

GRIF: WHY ARE WE SHOUTING?

INCAN: WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.

EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate.

<Edward scintillates>

Snoink wrote:Completely random, pointless works are rarely interesting except for the, "Look at how silly I can make something!" factor. Which is akin to navel-gazing. Stop it.

Wow. You guys got bored!

Totally hilarious, though!

Epic win, my friend. Epic win.

My favorite part was Edward scintillating. I started laughing at that point and didn't stop.

Two other moments of distinction:

The black hole falling on Bella and her all-caps declaration of love for Edward. Seriously, that's the entire plot of their series.

I enjoyed the third party "author".

In fact, I enjoyed the whole thing. I do wish that Charlie had a speaking part though.

Epic, epic win.

*thumbs up*

~GryphonFledgling

This was epic and it deserves a gold star!

I needed a good laugh and this one had me literally falling out of my chair. I LOVED THIS AND I AM NOT SCREAMING, JUST TALKING IN CAPS

Favorite part:

GRIF: Wait! What’s the point of this?

AUTHOR: Um...

GRIF: Wait, I’m the author.

AUTHOR: No you aren’t.

GRIF: Yes I am!

Yay! Go random kittens and bulbasaur!

I demand a movie made!

This is too good for words!

Haha, I can't stop laughing! Thanks for the awesome-ist B-Day present (although I know it wasn't intended for me!).

Epic Win!

My Favorite Part:

BELLA: OH MY GOSH, I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN HEART HEART LOVE LOVE ALL MY SOUL HEART LOVE EDWARD CULLEN.

<Antartica falls on Bella>

PENGUINATTACK: HAHAHA! NOW MY PENGUINS SHALL EAT YOU ALL UP!

ALL: OH NOES, A PENGUIN ATTACK!

EDWARD: Yeah... our story totally has a better plot.

There was a significant lack of Bulbasaur that I find appalling. I demand more Bulbasaur. MOAR!

Loller coaster!

Epic genius. You both are my hero(s).

HEART HEART LOVE LOVE ALL MY SOUL HEART LOVE

~ Jabber ~

This was good for your age. Keep going.

Oh. My. Gosh. I think my IQ just went down 10 pts, but it was totally worth it. My favorite partwas this:

EDWARD: I MUST PROTECT HER!

SNOINK: I MUST PROTECT... YOUR FACE! (haha!! )

GRIF: WHY ARE WE SHOUTING?

INCAN: WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.

Haha !

This seriously had me cracking up a bunch of times

Well done, hee hee

Xxx

Really? My favorite part?

INCAN: WE’RE NOT SHOUTING, WE’RE TALKING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS.

GRIF: How does that all work out?

I'm not sure if it's your literary genius that has me laughing, or the aftereffects of a sugar high that have me laughing so hard.

Look! It's the choo-choo shoe, Charlie! Ooooh!

LOL!
Hilarious. Absolutely brilliant.
Apparently you are a Lizard, snionk.
Go the random kittens!