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The Secret of The Swan: Ch5

Jimin strode into his apartment and smiled as his father in the living room. “Hello, father! I hope you’ve had a good day with uncle,” he greeted, bowing with respect. His father blinked once at him. He sat in his chair, not moving. He hadn’t been able to move in three years.

Jimin’s father, Pilwoo, was a detective- the best in Daegu. He was assigned to help discover the identity of the infamous Swan, one of the largest human traffickers in the world. He had gotten very close to The Swan, saw a glimpse of him before the warehouse he had pinned him in had gone into flames. He had to flee to save his life, and The Swan did the same. He had managed a feat that no one on the right side of the law was able to accomplish-to see The Swan in person. He was so close, but he slipped right through his fingers.

After that incident, The Swan laid low. Anyone with contact with him had disappeared with almost no trace, but he somehow kept the human trafficking ring going. There were theories that The Swan had died in the warehouse that day and his trade taken over, but he returned to the scene three years ago.

Jimin had been working the night that The Swan sent his man. He had come home to find his father within an inch of death. He had been in the hospital for months in a coma until he finally awoke- but in a completely paralyzed state. All he could do was blink his eyes to communicate. He recently began to be able to move one of his fingers. Jimin was filled with hope that this could lead to a possible recovery, but he just had to be patient.

With questioning from the police, his father revealed that the person who came had explained that he was sent by The Swan, and this was his revenge. With that being revealed, The Swan was well and alive, back to being hunted by authorities all over the country. His father left in a state to no longer be able to live a full life again.

Jimin had been through a depression through all of this and only got through with the support of his uncle. His uncle made it possible for him to still work to help support his father. Together they traded shifts to tend to their hero.

Jimin’s hatred for The Swan could not be measured. He never could understand how someone could be so evil and immoral. He thought about him every time he saw his father, which was The Swan’s goal. He wanted his father to suffer-to die would be merciful. The man that The Swan had sent had been vocal about The Swan’s wishes for his father. Jimin could never imagine being in the state his father was. He knew if his mother was alive, that seeing her husband in this state would kill her.

Jimin’s mother had died shortly after giving birth to Jimin due to natural causes and it haunted him his whole life since finding out. He carried the guilt even though his father had assured him that his mom would be happy to have given up her life for Jimin. He wondered why his father didn’t hate him for taking away the love of his life, but he was treasured by his father more than anything. He was always supported and loved, so Jimin would do anything he could for his father, especially in this state.

“Do you need anything?” He asked his father while waving to his uncle who was heading out the door to his job. Pilwoo blinked twice. “Okay, father,” Jimin smiled, pecking him on the cheek. He went to the kitchen to make himself some ramen and sat back down with his father. “Let me know if you need anything.”

They sat together as they did every night, tv flickering on their eyes, Jimin’s a reflecting pool as he held his father’s hand.

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writerkitty
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:D I'm back with another review for you!!

;-; Aww, this chapter was really sad. Poor Jimin and his father. His father doesn't deserve to be in such a state, he was doing the right thing! >.< It's really unfair how he got into such a state while The Swan is still out there, doing his illegal business.
You shall pay for you evil doings someday Swan!

This chapter was awesome! :O It answered a lot of questions I had about Jimin earlier. :P Now I know why Taehyung wants to kill Jimin. o.o I think The Swan knows that he obviously seeks revenge for what happened to his father. Besides, I'm quite sure most of the others who worked against The Swan are pretty much dead by now, so no wonder Jimin is their next target.

>.< After knowing more about The Swan's terrible business and how he'd destroyed the lives of many innocent people, it's even more painful to know that Taehyung is serving such horrid people. I know he owes them, but because The Swan saved his life, it doesn't really give him the right to kill others on behalf of them >.<

^^ I'm sure Taehyung will stand up to The Swan soon....A least I hope he does. ;-; I don't want Jimin to die, he's such a cinnamon roll, and the relationship he has with his fathers is really sweet.


He had gotten very close to The Swan, saw a glimpse of him before the warehouse he had pinned him in had gone into flames. He had to flee to save his life, and The Swan did the same. He had managed a feat that no one on the right side of the law was able to accomplish-to see The Swan in person. He was so close, but he slipped right through his fingers.


This part is really interesting. If I remember correctly when Taehyung wanted to meet The Swan, he said that he'd be disappointed in what he would see... o.o I wonder what he meant by that...
Maybe, The Swan didn't manage to escape the warehouse unharmed, and the flames caused him some amount of permanent damage...hmm

Or maybe The Swan doesn't really want to show his face xD

As always, this was an awesome and interesting chapter!! I'm really intrigued to read the rest! ^^


Keep up the good work!

writerkitty

You're hitting some red hot leads there, I'm not gonna clarify to give anything away but I'm impressed and I think its the best thing ever that you're so into this story :D

Thank you for the support and reviewing my work, is means so much! <3

^-^ Of course, your story is amazing! :O I can't wait to come up with more theories about the characters and the plot... xD And I can't wait to find out whether my earlier assumptions were right! ^^

I'll definitely keep reading and reviewing your story :D

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Honora wrote a review · Mon Feb 10, 2020 7:58 pm

Hey Rin! You know how this goes! ;)

He had gotten very close to The Swan, saw a glimpse of him before the warehouse he had pinned him in had gone into flames.
I had to reread this a couple of times to understand it but it could have been just me.

Overall that’s all I found I think. I think Jimin is a good character. I like him anyways. I think his character is cute and loving and it makes me wonder why The Swan wants him out of the picture...to torture his Dad more?? I’m really liking this so far. You’ve introduced a few characters while still having us know who the main ones are.

Keep up the good work!

Your friend,
Honora

I love the relationship between Jimin and his father. That is good. It makes me care about them. After you have readers that care about your characters, then you have their interest. You have mine!
After reading this it sounds like The Swan is a person. I forgot last chapter to say that I liked Taehyung's backstory. It sounded there like The Swan was a thing or a group.
Small error. In the first sentence, "as" I think shoud be "at".
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