^^ Hellooo, it's writerkitty back with another review!!
O.o Ooh, so it WAS Taehyung who came to the store after all! And... o.o his next target IS Jimin, oh no
He was fine until he saw the news report. It had been two years since he had committed the murder, so there was very little to find. There was only a little DNA to get off the body after being in the water for so long. There were no suspects, and the fact that he was a successful detective only made the list of people with motive be a large one. He knew he was in the clear, but his conscience had caught up to him. He had turned in the aisle to get away from the broadcast but saw the girl putting snacks into her bag. He watched her not pay for them and leave and tried to catch up to her to make her pay for it, but decided to just do it himself. He didn’t know why he felt the urge to do this, but he just knew it made him feel a little better.
;-; Aww, poor Taehyung, although he's a skilled killer and all, his past actions just keep haunting him. >.> Poor guy, trying to make himself feel a better buy paying for the goods that girl stole...
I think you always do a good job in portraying the guilt and regret that builds up in Taehyung after killing someone. The readers would usually hate him for what he's done, but the way you portray how he's mentally hurt and repents on it, makes us feel the opposite. And we get to understand that he's doing it all against his free will. >.> He deserves better, and the Swan should really pay for all the crimes he'd committed.
Yay! Backstory!"
*ahem* I'm a big fan for backstories... xD
Ooh...so The Swan took him in when he was homeless and gave him everything he required. O.o So that's why he 'owes them'
Taehyung still to this day didn’t know how the man found him, or why he trusted him, but he followed the man to his car. From there, he was taken to a modest home where he was welcomed by the servants of the home.
>.< Bad choice my boy...but I think something worse would've happened to young Taehyung if he stayed on the streets o.o
I think the Swan took him in for selfish reasons. O.o Maybe he wanted someone who'd work for him loyally without causing any trouble. We have no clue whether someone had betrayed him in the past...so that's a possibility...>.> The Swan did give him a harsh punishment for a small mistake he'd done but forgave him, I wonder it if would've been different if someone else had done the mistake. 0.0
Throughout it all, since being under The Swan’s wing, Taehyung had nothing to complain about. There was never a need to get an actual job, which would be hard without a birth certificate or other official documents anyway so it worked. The Taehyung that had lived in the orphanage fifteen years ago was gone, assumed to be dead. He was lucky that he didn’t die. He owed his life to The Swan.
I'm certain this was intentional. So no one will ever be able to figure out his actual identity, it's easier to cover up for his crimes because it's like Taehyung literally doesn't exist! :O clever thinking Swan
He lived under the eye of Minjun, The Swan’s best worker. He had basically raised Taehyung since he had arrived. He was slightly intimidated by him when he first brought him to the home and spent time with him, but Minjun quickly softened upon getting to know the boy with a heart of gold. Minjun was the closest thing Taehyung had for a father and loved him with all of his heart.
New character! ^^
Aw, well, I'm kinda glad Taehyung has someone he could call his 'family' even though they're probably serial killers or something o.o at least Minjun treated him like his son xD Now I'm curious to know more about Minjun
I really liked this chapter! It was really interesting to read and I can see the story build up quite nicely! ^^
Most of the questions I had in the previous chapter got answered here, and now I have a lot more new questions... so I can't wait to read more!!
Keep up the good work and never stop writing!!
writerkitty
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