And then.
It clicks..
You never liked me.
You never wanted me.
I was just a joke.
A Stupid.
Outrageous.
Fucking Joke.
Why could you just start with that.
Why did you let my dreams fly.
Why.
You made me believe it came true.
You made me think I was finally happy.
You made me think I was yours.
How.
Could.
You..
Spending countless hours for you,
Spending countless dollars on you.
SPENDING COUNTLESS LOVE TO YOU.
You broke me.
You completely broke me.
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Hello! This poem was recommended to me by yws so I thought why not write a mini review about it.
Rage, sorrow disappointment— these emotions evoked through me when I read this poem. It's a little wry, a little angsty. It's dramatic in the best way possible.
Something I liked about this poem is how how use punctuation and line breaks to create a sense of dramatic inner monologue.
Other than that, the realisation when someone you adore ends up breaking you apart is well explained in this poem, which, I also presume is the theme of it.
It's a short read but amazing nonetheless. Keep writing!
Esse poema, OMG! Ele é tão amargo e belo! Tão profundo e doloroso! A angustia de alguém que sofreu demais, de alguém que foi enganado. Isso é tão atual e antigo. Pelo que vi, você é ótima em escrever poemas dramáticos românticos! O verso mais forte para mim é: Spending countless dollars on you! Algo como: Como você pode? Eu te amei, te dei tudo, até dinheiro! É tragicamente lindo!!