The Progeny : Chapter 32

by MissGangamash

Published October 4, 2016

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In The Progeny (Novel)

Caius felt the crushing weight of the sunlight lifting off his body, slowly allowing his muscles to uncoil and loosen. He flickered his eyes open and peered through the darkness of the bedroom until he was able to focus on the crumpled lump on the bed. Evie was still asleep and hidden from him. He watched her, trying to simmer the nervousness that began to make him twitch. Finally, after a stretched out length of stiff silence, Evie’s form began to roam about under the duvet. She flipped back the cover and pushed herself up onto her elbows, blinking away her dead-like state of sleep. Caius’ chest tightened as he stayed in the chair, waiting for her eyes to wander and set on him.

She looked to the door and pulled a face of anguish before shifting up to a sitting position and resting her back on the headboard with a sigh. Caius knew that the longer he stayed there, silent and shrouded in shadow, the more violated she would feel when she realised he had been watching her.

So, through a lump in his throat, he made his presence known. “Evie.”

She stiffened, yanking the duvet up to cover her grey vest top, and found Caius. A smile curved onto her lips but then realisation of the previous night must have hit her because the smile turned into a frown. “Caius.”

He leaned forward to rest his forearms on his thighs as he watched her. “I know you’re mad.”

“You created another progeny,” she said, her face twisted with betrayal. “You never wanted to be a Maker, Caius. You had been forced to Turn me. And then you just go off and Turn another.”

The pain in her eyes was too much for him to bear. His gaze fell to the floor. “It’s not that simple.”

“You didn’t have a choice to Turn me.”

“I didn’t have a choice to Turn him, either,” Caius added quickly, shooting her a look.

She gulped and her expression softened. “You didn’t?”

He knew he couldn’t tell her the truth and he thought he had trapped himself in a corner before something that Varsee had said came to him. “It was Milah,” he said. “She forced me. She wanted me to continue the bloodline. She knew about you. That you were no longer mine.”

“So you didn’t want to Turn him?”

He shook his head. “Of course not. You’re all I could ever want.”

Her bottom lip began to quiver and a sudden wave of panic washed over Caius. Had he said something wrong?

“Oh Caius,” she sobbed, clasping her hands to her chest. “I’m so sorry. I thought… I thought… I don’t know what I thought. That you’d changed. That you were getting me back for what I have with Varsee.” She crawled to the foot of the bed. “Because you know you’re all I could ever want, right?”

He nodded vigorously. At the sight of tears brewing in her eyes, Caius was holding back tears of his own. She scrambled off the bed and jumped onto his lap, wrapping her arms him. “I love you,” she mumbled against his neck.

His tears burst free, burning down his cheeks. He squeezed her tightly against him. “I love you, too,” he said through a sob and pressed a heavy kiss to the soft skin behind her ear. “I love you so much.”

She let out a spluttering sob and shifted her weight so her chest was pressed firmly against his. After a moment, he could feel her letting go and he fought back the urge to hold her tighter. She brushed back his hair from his face and searched his eyes. Blood tracks smeared her cheeks, making the hazel of her irises look like shining sliver against the red. “How is he?”

Lost in her beauty, Caius choked on his words and wasn’t able to piece together a coherent thought. “How’s who?”

She smiled and ran her thumb over his cheekbone cherishingly. “Your new progeny.”

“Oh. He’s okay. He has some serious abandonment issues but other than that, he’s your average teenage boy.”

“Are you sure you can handle him?”

He nodded. “He’s doing well so far.” He smoothed his hand down her back and her eyes fluttered closed at his touch. “I have to be there for him, Evie. I need to be a good Maker for him. It’s my responsibility. But just because my focus will be on him, doesn’t mean I care for you any less. Okay?”

She nodded in understanding but dropped her eyes to his chest.

He touched her chin and angled her face to his. A pained look creased her brows but then he smiled at her and it faded. “I wish things were how they used to be.”

“Me too,” she agreed.

“But to be honest, the whole world could crumble to ash but as long as I have you by my side, I’d be happy.”

She smiled and cupped his face, drawing him closer to her. His hands snaked around her waist and pressed into her lower back as she stole a kiss. His heart swelled as the kiss deepened and she forced his back against the back of the chair. He loved this woman so much he wished he could breathe just so she could know how much she stole his breath away. He wished his heart could beat so she knew just how fast she would make it hammer in his chest. But even though he was missing those vital parts that made him one of the living, she always had a way of making him feel alive.

With an effort, he drew her back until their lips parted. Evie rested her forehead against his and closed her eyes. “I should go and check up on him. See how his first day of sleep went.”

Evie nodded. “Okay. I’ll go downstairs and talk to Varsee. Tell her everything’s okay.”

Caius smiled and managed to briskly catch her lips before she jumped off him. Her hands smoothed down her pyjama top. “I’d better get dressed. You go. I’ll meet you downstairs.”

He nodded and left the room, shutting the door behind him to give her some privacy. Lamp light streamed up the stairs and Caius could hear voices and footsteps coming from the living room as he made his way across the landing. The door to the spare room was shut so he gave it a knock, figuring Robin wouldn’t have braved going downstairs alone.

He had been right.

“Yeah?” Robin’s groggy voice called from behind the door.

“It’s Caius. Can I come in?”

“Sure. Whatever.”

Caius opened the door and slipped into the room. Robin was perched on the single bed, bathed in the greenish glow of the light of the lamp on the bedside table that was dulled by the mint green lampshade. He had his head bowed and his hands clasped between his open knees. Caius crossed the room and sank beside him.

“How did you sleep?” he asked, his voice quiet and soft.

“I feel like I’ve been asleep for a year.” Robin’s brown eyes flicked to him. “I’m guessing I’m going to get used to that, right?”

Caius nodded. “It’s a lot to take in, I know.”

“I see your girlfriend didn’t bite your head off.”

Caius smiled faintly. “We made up.”

Robin nodded. “That’s good. And what about the blonde chick? I get the feeling she doesn’t like you very much.”

“She’s Evie’s Maker. She’s just protective.”

Robin nodded again, his eyes casted downwards. “I get that.”

“Are you going to come downstairs?”

Robin sucked in a pained breath through his teeth, making his whole body grow taunt before it slumped with his exhale. “After the reception I got last night?”

Caius caught a glimpse of his face through his messy hair before he turned away slightly and looked to the lamplight. He looked hurt.

“Evie is going to talk to Varsee and clear everything up.”

“And what about the guy I heard last night?”

“Alexander?” Caius thought for a moment. “He’ll be fine.”

“What’s he like?”

“Says what he thinks and doesn’t understand the concept of boundaries.”

Caius heard Robin laugh a little but when his face came back into view, he looked sombre as his eyes scoped the wooden floor. “Do you think he’ll like me?”

“Well there’s only one way to find out.” Caius stood but Robin didn’t move.

“I feel like I’m being intrusive,” Robin admitted, his face pinched with discomfort.

Caius sank back down beside him and folded himself into a position mirroring Robin’s. “You belong here, Robin - with me.”

He shook his head. “I’ve never belonged anywhere. I thought that when I actually did, it’d feel different. This feels the same.”

“That’s because you haven’t given it a chance. This is all new to me, too. Do you think I like living here? I didn’t choose this place. I just sort of found myself here. And it’s not about where you are- it’s about the people you’re with.” He leaned in a little so his shoulder knocked against Robin. His brown eyes flickered up tentatively and caught Caius’ warm gaze. “You lost your family but you have a new one now. I am your family.”

Robin smiled slightly and quickly looked down, shying away from showing emotion. Caius slapped him on the back and got to his feet once more. This time Robin followed, glancing wearily from the closed door to his Maker.

“They’ll like you,” Caius promised.

“No one likes me.”

“I like you.”

Robin gave him a doubtful look. “You have to say that, you’re my Maker.”

Caius laughed, making him smile up at him. “Well they’ll tolerate you at least.”

Robin shrugged. “I could work with that.”

“So I’m on my stage doing my thing and then this chick practically dives at me and shoves a wad of twenties down my-” Alexander’s voice trailed off as his eyes hit Robin who had just placed his feet onto the floor of the hallway.

Alexander leaped from the sofa and vampire sprinted across the room to stop inches from Robin in a matter of milliseconds. Robin stumbled back, his brown eyes wide with surprise. Alexander’s fair hair settled back into place, framing his crystal blue eyes as they inspected the boy before him. Tonight he was wearing an oversized red and black plaid shirt with a pair of white jeans that were more holes than material, covering his crotch but very little else.

“So this is the new guy.” The blonde vampire smirked as he started prodding Robin like a child figuring out what the buttons did on his new toy. Robin squirmed and twisted to dodge his violating pokes. When he stopped, Robin gulped and looked up at him in the eyes. Alexander was smiling down at him. Robin smiled back nervously. “The sickly look really works for you.”

Robin furrowed his brows. “Um… thank you?”

“So scrawny.” Alexander grinned when he squeezed Robin’s thin waist and made him emit a surprised squeak. “And you’re stuck with that body forever. Fortunately for me, I was Turned in my prime.” He winked.

Over Alexander’s shoulder, Caius saw Varsee’s eyes roll as she watched from the armchair.

“At least your hair still grows so there’s some hope there.” He ruffled Robin’s chopped up mop of hair. Alexander stepped back with a smile and ran his fingers through his own blonde locks. “Which I should be thankful for because the buzz cut did not work for me. Anyway-” He thrust his hand out. “I’m Alexander.”

Robin took his hand and stared up at him, a little mystified. “Robin.”

Alexander grinned. “Nice to meet you, kid. How old are you?”

“Seventeen.”

“Seventeen…” Alexander pondered a moment, eyeing Robin up in a way that made even Caius feel exposed. “I guess I could work with that.” He squeezed Robin’s hand with a wink before traipsing back to the sofa and collapsing lengthways across it.

Robin edged backwards and knocked against Caius. “What did he mean by that?” he whispered.

“It means you don’t need to worry about him not liking you. But remember to lock the door when you shower.”

He looked up at his Maker in horror. Caius briefly caught his eye before he headed towards Evie, trying to contain the shudder at the memory of his first night in the house. Caius had been in the bathroom and had begun to undress, only to realise that Alexander had not shut the door. He had turned to find him watching him, his eyes scoping Caius’ naked chest with a wicked grin.

The two armchairs had been turned around so they were now facing the sofa instead of the T.V. Caius stood by Evie’s chair and saw that Robin had only taken a few tentative steps, just about crossing the invisible threshold between hallway and living area.

Varsee hauled herself to her feet and met him, folding her arms over her chest. “I’m sorry about how cold I was last night. It was just a shock.”

Robin gulped and nodded, his brown eyes wide and fearful.

Varsee smiled. “Would you like a glass of blood?”

His eyes shifted to Caius as if for permission. His Maker sent him a nod and Robin smiled.

“Yes. Yes, I’d like that very much.”

Varsee disappeared into the kitchen and Robin perched carefully on the end of the sofa after Alexander swivelled around, placing his feet on the floor and patted the spare place beside him enthusiastically.

Caius watched carefully as Robin nodded his thanks to Varsee and took the glass of blood from her hands. Robin stared down at it for a moment then his fangs unsheathed with a click. It surprised him and he blushed a little when he realised everyone in the room had watched him and saw him start.

“Only drink half,” said Caius.

Robin paused, his lips on the rim of the glass. He raised a questioning eyebrow.

“It will teach you self-control,” added Caius. Although he was pretty sure Robin could control himself, it was best to make sure. Robin did what he said with ease, placing the half empty glass on the coffee table. In the corner of his eye, Caius saw Evie lick her lips, her eyes trained longingly on the glass. But then she blinked and looked away. With Robin to take care of, Caius had almost forgotten that Evie was also only a new-born herself and was possibly dealing with the same struggles. Or possibly not. Maybe Evie wasn’t a completely clean slate when it came to her vampire instincts. Her connection to Caius had lasted through her becoming Varsee’s, maybe her knowledge and skills of being a vampire had, too. Either way, she was Varsee’s responsibility now, not his. He needed to focus on his own progeny.

Varsee relaxed back into the vacated armchair and everyone fell silent. After a moment, Robin began to fidget and he slumped back against the back of the sofa. “So is this what you do all night? Just sit here?” He looked around the room.

The vampires all glanced at each other.

“Well no. I’ve got a job down in a vampire bar not too far from here. It’s very flexible though. I go when I want to,” said Alexander and draped his long legs over Robin’s lap. “I should take you sometime. It’d be fun.”

“Not any time soon,” said Caius. “He’s too new to be in such a crowded room full of blood. Too much temptation.”

“That there is.” Alexander grinned, his eyes sparkling with mischief. He stretched out his arm and curled a strand of Robin’s hair around his finger before Robin edged out of his reach. “But I’d keep my eye on him.”

“When he’s ready.”

“Really?” Evie blinked up at him from her chair. “You’re going to take him to a vampire bar? You hate those places.”

“It’ll be good practice for him,” replied Caius, a little confused at the wounded look Evie was giving him.

“But you hate those places,” she repeated under her breath, looking down at her lap.

“Anyway, that’s what I do,” Alexander continued. “My sis fortifies the house to make sure the pyscho Nest vampires keep their distance. Which basically means going around discreetly killing livestock. And those two,” he gave Evie and Caius pointed looks, “they just mooch off us.”

“Psycho Nest vampires?” Robin repeated.

“Don’t worry about them, kid. We’ve got them under control.”

Evie bristled and hugged herself. Varsee patted her knee comfortingly and Caius’ heart constricted at the adulation in both their eyes. They really were Maker and progeny. The way they should be. A Maker and a progeny were not supposed to fall in love and Caius was starting to realise why more and more each night. It was natural for them to love one another. It wasn’t natural for them to be in love with one another. Boundaries had been blurred and things had gotten complicated. And this living arrangement wasn’t helping that.

Alexander leaned over the sofa and grabbed a glass settled on the floor. He swirled the remaining blood in it and pulled a face. “I’m sick of this bagged up shit. Sis, could you go call us a blood whore? I need something fresh.”

Varsee rose to her feet. “Sure.”

“Make sure it’s blonde and hot,” he added as she made her way back to the kitchen.

“Guy or girl?”

Alexander flashed her a grin. “Surprise me.”

Varsee grinned back then tried to hide it when her eyes flickered to the others in the room. She caught Alexander’s wink before she left.

When Alexander turned back around, he met Caius’ disapproving glare. “I told you he didn’t need temptation.”

Alexander rolled his eyes. “Relax, he’s a good kid. And we’re all right here if he loses it.” He looked to Robin. “Plus, I only like sharing my meals with my sis so you’ll have to go through me.”

“I won’t need you to hold me down. I’m fine,” said Robin. He hadn’t even looked at his glass of blood since he’d set it down.

“Argh, you’re just so darn cute I might let you take a bite anyway.”

Robin shifted his eyes to Alexander. He seemed to be getting used to him now, he no longer looked like he was ready to jump out of his skin. “Only if Caius allows me to.”

A flurry of emotion inside Caius’ chest made the backs of his eyes sting with tears. When Robin’s sober eyes caught his, Caius gasped for an unneeded breath. He felt it. Their bond stronger than ever, tight and unyielding like a fist around his heart yet also comforting and familiar. Like finding a prized possession amidst a sea of junk and suddenly remembering how much you missed it. And he had missed it. The simple, impervious connection to his progeny and the feeling of knowing that they were on your side, no matter what. He remembered when his connection to Evie had been simple. Remembered the first moment he really felt it. Out in a dark street at night, the first time Evie had been around temptation since he had found her on the doorstep of her old house covered in blood with a body at her feet and a look of sheer terror in her eyes. She had seen the wounded man. Had seen the blood dripping from his shoulder. And had moved on.

Caius caught Robin smiling at him and he managed to pull himself out of the past long enough to return it. Robin was different to Evie. He was his progeny and only his progeny. Standing by Evie’s side, he felt a little guilty that he was starting to grow quite fond of being a Maker for Robin after doing such a horrible job at being hers. But this was a chance for him to make up for his mistakes. If Evie had never fallen in love with Caius, he was pretty sure she would have turned rogue. And if he let Robin turn rogue, they’d all be dead.

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Carlito
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Carlito wrote a review Review · Nov 13, 2016

Hello hello! I apologize, I haven't read the previous chapters of this work, but it's about time to get this out of the green room, yes? :)

I think you're doing a lot of things well in this story, or at least in this isolated chapter. Even though I'm coming in very late to the story, I felt I was able to understand what was happening in this chapter and the basic tenet of what is happening here, which is a testament to your style of writing. You do a really nice job of infusing descriptions within the action and dialogue.

I can also tell that you've put a lot of thought into this world and at least in this isolated chapter, I thought you did a nice job including little world details without it getting info-dumpy or heavy. Things like the vampire bar or getting a blood whore. I'm glad there wasn't a big explanation about what those things are because it felt more natural this way. The only individual that probably doesn't know about all of these things is Robin, so I'm glad the progression didn't slow down just to clue him in.

I struggled a bit to keep all of the characters straight. I know part of why that was difficult for me is because I'm coming in very late and I have no context or frame of reference about what's been happening. That being said, I think the other part of why I had a difficult time keeping everyone straight was because a lot happened in this chapter. It's okay to have dense chapters with lots going on, but don't lose sight of what the focus is. I think you have two focuses here - Evie and Caius making up and Robin getting settled in. That's fine, but I would split them up with scene breaks at the very least.

I can also tell you've put a lot of thought into this plot because there are a lot of different things going on and lots of little conflicts between different characters. That's awesome. This is definitely an interesting cast and I would be curious to see where you're planning on going with all of the little things you've set up! There is a lot of juicy stuff brewing :)

One little thing to be mindful of in your dialogue (overall I thought your dialogue sounded good and natural) is not accidentally falling into a telling trap. It's easy to tell without meaning to in dialogue with "as you know" dialogue. This is an article you can read about it if you're interested, but the basic idea is avoiding dialogue that conveys information that the characters already know just for the reader's benefit. The one place I thought you miiiiight have branched into this territory was towards the beginning when Caius and Evie were talking about her turning and this new turning. Now I can't be sure because I don't have a lot of context, but it felt like this was information that the reader may have seen in earlier chapters and now we're hashing it all out again to see them make up. Some review is okay if the events happened several chapters ago, but otherwise you can summarize the conversation when it's stuff the reader has already seen happen, and then show the rest of the conversation. (if that makes sense?)

Overall though, I think you have a strong chapter and an interesting idea here. I feel like I didn't have many notes for you, so if there's anything you would like feedback about that I didn't already mention, let me know and I'll try to oblige! And let me know if anything I said was confusing! :D

Thank you so much for the review! I know it's hard to review a one off chapter if it's in the middle of a story so thanks for taking the time to have a go :D I'm glad you said that a lot was going on in this chapter because I do consider this a slow novel (which is intentional) as it's more to do with character development and their relationships than being very action packed. But I do think there is a lot going on if you focus, like you said, there's a lot of little conflicts going on and that's what this novel focuses on.

Thanks again for the review and the tips :D

You're very welcome, and I'm glad you found it helpful! :D

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Sonder wrote a review Review · Oct 11, 2016

Hey Ganga! Sorry for the wait. Life is crazy, as always. This review is going to be a little shorter because I only have a few things. :)
Overall this chapter was pretty slow. Some of it felt unnecessary, like it could be pared down to the essentials. You need to determine if every chapter is advancing the plot, if it is really needed in the scope of things. It's your decision, but I felt that this chapter was mostly filler that could be cut down and made clearer. The conflict with Evie and Caius was resolved really quickly, and the characters seem a little too self-aware, such as with Caius reflecting on his relationships every few minutes.
Another thing, though I'm not sure that it's a nitpick or just personal preference, but Alex's flirting crossed the line a little, I think. His flirting with Robin came off especially pervy, with the age gap and all, but I guess that's part of his character? Idk if it's just that I haven't been up to date for a while but I don't remember him coming off as creepy before. Mischievous and sexual, yes, but not touch-young-men-without-permission creepy? A bit of his interaction with Robin seemed unnatural, like too forward/ forced, and Robin should have perhaps reacted stronger. I know I would have been creeped out. Robin's so new to this, there's all these new people, he still doesn't really know Caius, etc. It'd be overwhelming, and then on top of it, to have a much older stranger touching you and flirting with you? Yikes. Just some things to think about.
Other than those, it was okay. :P
Just one technical error.

A smile curved onto her lips but then realisation of the previous night must have hit her because the smile turned into a frown.
Run-on sentence.

I loved this sentence, for some reason:
Blood tracks smeared her cheeks, making the hazel of her irises look like shining sliver against the red.


And this? Oh my gosh Alex is such a perv. XD
He had turned to find him watching him, his eyes scoping Caius’ naked chest with a wicked grin.
Sooo pervy. He must be bored with his life.

Again, there's not much for me to say because I felt that there was not as much substance to this chapter. I think you could cut this down and incorporate the character development that occurs here in other chapters, to avoid this stagnant sitting-still and small-talk, you feel? As always, these are just my suggestions. :)

Great job and keep writing!

~Night

Hello! And no problem, just glad you're sticking with it :)

The conflict between Caius and Evie was superficially resolved but it is still resonating. You could see it a bit when they were talking about the vampire bars. Even though Evie said she was okay with Caius having to be a better Maker to Robin than he was to her, she really isn't.

Most of the characters have been around for a long time. Caius has been himself for several centuries so you describing him as 'self aware' is actually quite right and should be expected of an ancient vampire. He knows himself very well. He understands his strengths and his weaknesses.

Alexander is constantly crossing a line! It'll all intentional and part of his character, but don't think that means I condone his behaviour. He is a bit pervy, but he mainly does things to get a rise out of people. He needs to be the centre of attention and so he acts in a way to make sure he is. Age gaps are kind of a grey area in the vampire world. Alexander did ask for Robin's age to check that he was of legal age... which he is, and the touching wasn't sexual.

Robin is new to this weird, mixed up family so his reactions are somewhat dialled down because he doesn't really know what's going on. And as you know from what he has said about himself, he has been bullied all his life so it's likely he's not the type to stick up for himself.

The chapter was supposed to be slow but it does partner up with the next one, I just split it in two so it wasn't so dauntingly long to read. Robin had just become a vampire and he was really excited to delve into the cool, elusive vampire world and now he is just sitting around in a farm house with a bunch of random vamps. It's an meaningful anti-climax to show that everything isn't all what it seems and maybe dreams should just stay dreams and not become reality? I mean, Robin even says, %u201CSo is this what you do all night? Just sit here?%u201D He was obviously expecting his life to suddenly just become amazing!

Thanks for reviewing! :D



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