You often ask on the meaning behind my eyes
when we met in the way, and then have stepped
together into the coffee shop.
We've been talking about the past,
that we might have forgotten
and we have also talked about the present,
you have said that you doubt on your future.
So I've answered that we are not able to predict the future,
not to mention to return to the past.
We are only able to change the present with the choices that we have.
Soon, don't ask on the meaning behind my eyes again
because I was also filled with the doubts.
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Hello. Molly here to review! Overall I really liked the poem! Any grammar problems were already discussed. The idea was very unique and I liked it a lot! It was a very nice flow and the words felt natural in my mouth. The set up was nice and the poem was very intriguing. Keep writing because you are great! I really liked the simplicity of this poem. Nice job. Keep trying.
Keep writing!
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Molly
hi Dreamwork
i like your poem, its really good, but i think some of your grammar lapsed.. and be careful when to use the prepositions such as on, about, etc.
you can improve that, keep on writing , goodluck
Hello, dreamwork, my friend! I'm fairly new to WYS, so please forgive me if this review is lame! Haha! Here it goes!
It captured my attention and was very interesting! I loved your style of writing! Your grammar was really good and I loved how you intertwined conversation within the poem! 
You're doing great! Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading some more of your works!
Overall, this poem was really good!
~Skyler
hey Dreamwork!
your work is quite good. i loved your way of writing poem. you have described some conversation in form of poetry, which is good. it is very creative thought. you description is good, with right feel. poetry is short and sweet.
main thing is you have wriiten a latent message inside the poem which is marvellous.
overall poem is good. nice job. keep it up.