Congratulations on such a moving poem centered around a theme that is current today. (Really hoping this review doesn't sound dumb because I've been awake since early this morning and my eyes barely open.)
I like your imagery a lot. Although your imagery does not remind me of Syria per se, it still characterizes the horrific events that happened there. There is so much emotion conveyed in your words. You describe the heart of oppression with your words.
They danced on our cries,
and sip our blood with golden mugs,
Those two lines are a god visual and they capture the cruelty that Syrian leaders have displayed in the past months. Yet these lines describe various other events, past, presents, and even future. That's another think I really love about this poem: It applies to history. There have been many other predatory leaders "sitting on thrones studded with diamonds."
Love this poem! Keep up the good work:)
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