One miss spoken word.
One large fight.
All I said.... They Proclaim.
They claim, what a horrid personal attack.
You claim, it was nothing but respect.
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But what is it really.
It was a misunderstanding.
But in the end, you are blamed.
You claim, this cant be true.
They claim, but it is.
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Society supports the one's they love.
But what happens when you arent loved.
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Hatred happens.
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Hi! Sarah here to review. I must say, I like this poem! It illustrates perfectly the real world. I only have a few things to say, so I might put random letters when I'm done to get points. Thanks!
For the first thing, its spelled 'misspoken', not miss spoken. Or did you mean it that way? You can ignore me. Also, what are the dots between stanzas? Did you do that for appearance, or because you don't know how to form the stanzas? Because if its the latter, just do Shift+Enter to do a new line, then do Enter to start a new stanza. That will get the actual stanzas.
Keep writing! I don't really need random letters, but I'll do it anyways because its fun.
Thankyou sarah
Tigerlilly here for a review!
WOW. This was pretty deep! I love how you illustrate how harsh people can be, how they dont even go into the details to find out what really happens, they just stick with the people they love. I've had it happen to me several times, so I could really relate. It seems like society today just decides who's better upon the popularity, looks, and intelligence level of people. Its not fair, and I do not appreciate it at all.
I really like the way you begin, you had pulled me in from the start! And the ending was very strong as well, which is always good in a poem/story. Overall, this was an amazing poem and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Thankyou, Im sorry I didnt say thanks straight away
No problem!