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This opening sounds like an alien talking. XD
Morning respect? I like the ambience of this stanza, but I need to work out the meaning of it in my head. XD Because I'm not entirely sure.
So, this is very immediate, this is also very commanding of the other person being told what to do. The bed? What? So this is another work about sex? And the person only wants to get married in the future? This is clearly a non-conventional relationship. Well, at least, non-traditional.
These lines are very hopeful.
I feel this person is secretly sexually motivated and there is something creepy about this work and the person narrating it. Hmmm. I think they could be quite secretly aggressive. O.o Hmm. Very creepy indeed. Somewhat silently horrific.