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Lulz
Maturity at it's greatest.
How about... let's not talk about sex. XD
This is my first lyrical review and of course I get this well that does make me laugh.But I agree with demib how the bloody hell is it supposed to be educational?It did make me laugh and could be viewed as humorous. My favorite lines were "I can see it in your eyes" and the one saying is it trust is it love but I am not sure how self defense fits unless you mean well you know sexual predatory.Oh yeah and congratulations on being the first and possibly only health song.[That is a compliment not an insult]
Umm.. I should not be reading this.... Um How The Hell IS This supposed to be EDUCATIONAL??? no offense but but how? its very strange but good.
Oookay, the person is depressed and all the narrator wants to do is talk about sex?
Not sure I like this..lol.