Kiss Kiss Kiss Tell Tell Tell

Hello. XD

The title of this is definitely distinctive of you, because of the incessant repetition, however, apart from that, the rest of it: SOUNDS NOTHING LIKE YOU, AS THE MODERN WRITER AT ALL! XDDD
And what I mean by that, is this:

If you must kiss me,
then you must tell me.
What words can I say?
You sure do thrill me.
If only I could,
stop being so down.
If only I could,
just keep on the ground.

Here you bring in the structure of yours I am more familiar with reading:

the rhetorical questions, the style: You sure do thrill me, is very colloquial and very you. Erm, the repetition of if only, and all this kind of broken up lines with little bits of punctuation. The punctuation is quite unusual for you actually, but it does help with the reading experience. XD

So kiss me, kiss me.
Again and again.
So tell me, tell me.
How this shouldn't end.

This is completely! trademark of you, with the shortness of the lines, the repetition and the sort of commanding way in which it's stylised, because ultimately, these are commands. XD

Your head is swirling,
no sense of knowledge.
I would help now,
Sp please don't worry.
Keep your eyes in check.
Other people laugh.
Because they're jealous;
only love their pets.

This is all very romantic for you. Hmmm. Keep your eyes in check? That kind of ruined the whole illusion, but I suppose it does link to love's infatuation of the mind. And seeing what you want to see rather than what's actually there sometimes. Which is a very clever metaphor to use. If that was even what this was about? XD Or I interpreted the line wrong -.-
And loving animals more than humans is nothing to be ashamed about! Animals are companions too.

Take this heart-shaped oath,
and into your heart.
It has my name there.
Please don't try to laugh.
I am serious,
but not in that way.
I will care for you.
So just name the date.

Name the date of what? The actual date? The wedding? The commitment day? This didn't really make sense in my mind. there is a lot of build up to something rather ambiguous. What does it all mean? And what does one character want from the other? Apart from loving. Obviously. XD

Kiss kiss kiss
Tell tell tell
Love does rule
the whole world.
Kiss kiss kiss
Tell tell tell
Love does rule
the whole world.
Kiss kiss kiss
Tell tell tell
Love does rule
the whole world.
Kiss kiss kiss
Tell tell tell
Love does rule
the whole world.

That is definitely you!
1. ambiguous ending
2. repetition (again)
3. commanding language
4. "stacked" sort of structure, so all the ideas are literally on top of each other.
I'm not sure what to think about this one.

~L x