Ok, so I realised that I hadn't written a poem in some time so I thought that it might be a good idea. Unfortunately, I seem unable to write anything ground-breaking/of any importance. So this poem is all in good heart and in the name of fun and jolly times. Don't take offence at it, because then you're silly. 
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One time is okay, you know,
And two is also good.
But when you do it three or more,
Then you haven’t understood.
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You see, my friend, it’s all very well
When you’re not on the receiving end.
But when you are, by gum! It’s hard!
And the red mist always descends.
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The thing that you do is antagonizing.
It annoys, frustrates and aggrieves.
It’s not very big, it’s really quite small.
But unfortunately, it’s my pet peeve.
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Don’t think that I’m harsh; it’s not only me,
Of this little OCD I am sure.
Because all over the world there are writers who
Just sit at their laptops and endure.
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All your chat speak and caps,
And your large neon font size,
All of your L8ers and Sk8ers,
And your un-capitalized I’s.
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It’s a wave we can’t stop,
A problem without solution.
So we can only stare in horror
At the chat-speak revolution!
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Awesome! *bows*
Lol, I love this piece! I must show this to my friends, they could learn.
Maybe instead of "it's all very well," "all is well?"
Umm, by gum? Lol.
I love this part. It flows and I can totally agree.
Aye! But maybe take out the "just" in the last line.
Love this one too.
This is a really funny poem. I liked it! *gives star*
--Olivia
Hello Amy! This is a very awesome poem, and I was laughing the whole way. I do have a few nitpicks though.
My comments are in italics.
I loved this part, it's amazing.
Err, why the gum refrence? It sort of reminds me of Robin's corny lines in the Batman 1966 TV Show.
I really love this stanza, but I don't think the last part seems to flow very well.
Other then that, I absolutely loved it! At some parts it did get a little confusing and corny, but I'm sure that it's nothing you won't be able to fix.
That's all for now.
PM me if with questions.
Haha, thanks Kat!
*blushes*
Oh, have I done many of these! I just never posted them
*bows before Amy* You're awesomely epic.
But, no matter I always have to say something constructive. And I know you probably didn't intend this to have any kind of constructive review, but! I decided I won't
Have a good night!
- Kat
Thanks guys!
Eddie and Pretty, I know that it isn't my best at all! As I did say, it was just a bit of fun. Light relief in these tough economic times, y'know?
That. Was. Beautiful. *bawls*
You are fantastic my dear Amizzle. Just fantastic.
So hilarious I'm not even going to review this. Though I will star it in hopes it will become a featured work. That way everyone can see it!
*stars*
Keep up the fabulous -ness
Kamas
Ha ha!
That's funny! Not the best peice ever written but hey, who cares?
lol nice..