The Lord is my Saddle Partner

by *singerofthenight*

Published March 19, 2008

In poems

ok read this poem i just came across...


My forty years gathering
are a saddle and a horse,
spurs and a bedroll,
and catch rope of course.

I don't make much wages,
so the things that I own,
are sure enough mine,
'cuz I can't get a loan.

Now folks might believe
I'd be lonesome out there,
in those juniper breaks,
where there's no one to share.

The things that I hear
and the things that I see
but I've got more
than those folks would believe.

'Cuz the Lord is my saddle partner
and we're never apart.

Whenever I want,
we can talk heart to heart.

And the Lords also there
for each one of you.
If you've got a problem.
he nows what to do.

Just let him take charge
of all that we own.
With the Lord for our saddle partner,
We're never alone.



*well hope you liked it.*

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Fand
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Fand commented Comment · Apr 12, 2008

Dear, if you didn't write it, it doesn't belong in this forum. Maybe in the Lounge, or the Christian usergroup, but not here. This is for writers to post their own work and receive critiques.

Can we lock this?

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Echolair
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Echolair commented Comment · Apr 11, 2008

Awwww.. The Lord as our saddle partner..I love it. :D

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Stori
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Stori commented Comment · Mar 19, 2008

Nice one singer.

so the things that I own,
are sure enoug mine


should be "enough."



You sound like you're becoming emotionally involved with the custard.
— Nikki Morgan