Young Writers Society

I hate Religion and 'God' so much. I do not believe that 'God' exists and I just needed to let you know that.

Absolutly brilliant poem! Wonderfully written, very clear in some weird way. Very enjoyable. A good piece of work.

yeah sorry about that. i just was trying to find...i dont know... a catch phrase?

This was wonderful, loved it. A few things though.

First, when you say 'I am desperate for your love' in the first two lines it makes it sounds as though you don't have their love, even though you want it. Once I read on, I understood it, but you might want to change the way you phrase that. Having your readers confused within the first lines is never good.

*singerofthenight* wrote:Tears stream down
Leaving trails of sorrow
To slide down my face.

I only had one problem with your story, if it is a poem I think that it should at least have verses, like after every four lines or so, you start another four but you leave a space between each. Understand?
shanan-cat! Rock on!

I've read one of the other related series, ahhhhh! what is it called!

but its really good

I am not Christian, or even religious, but I can appreciate religious/spiritual poetry and prose. What I cannot forgive is apologizing for your faith, as you did in the summary beneath the title.

The poem itself is, if a little cliche, not objectionable.

Amen!

Go Jesus, you know it!

I liked this poem. It was really simple, but it was loving and really expressed your want and thanks to God.

Really have nothing else to say have I...

*hallelujah*

~GryphonFledgling

I've read one of the other related series, ahhhhh! what is it called!

but its really good

I knew you religous when I saw the Casting Crowns avatar. There is a book series called Sierra Jensen. It's about a Christan teen going though life as a God-fearing person. It has Christ's veiw on teen problems its awesome !

I am a church goer my self i really like this. If you go to church do you read it there?
If not you should it would give others inspiration to write happy and joyful things not like me which is total opposite. I love the lord he is great. Ominpotent i say which means all powerful high authority.

i really like this keep up the awesome work!

SimonCowellLuver

THANK YOU! if only everybody new him......*sighs* hey have you heard about the project they are doing in china? abotu building churches?

AMEN!!!!!

I love this poem girl!

It gives people visualization of the love Christ has for us.