I love this, especially your use of adjectives, like 'haze' and 'ethereal' (it's been a long time since i've seen that word used). I also like the way you progresses from a like for rain, to a love, to an obsession, I think that suits the poem really well To finish off, the penultimate line 'Their icy touch against my scorching soul' works so well, and I just love the contrast you've used there
Keep it up!
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