Hello, Laure!
RachelLeeAnn here to review!
Though there isn't much subject material to review, I'll do my best.
I really like the concept behind this. When I read the title "Carved Words," I immediately pictured words carved into a tree. However, after reading the poem, I realize it's more of words being "carved" into a person, if you will. At least, that's how I interpreted it...
I've had my fair share of short poems, so I won't bash you too hard about the fact that it's very, very short. I would LOVE to see you expand this a bit more.
Great job!
-Rae^^
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