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Tue Jun 11, 2019 2:42 pm
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Liminality says...



Hello, YWSers! Decided to set this thread up to motivate my lazy self to review more poems, etc.

Things I can review (in order of confidence):
1. Poems/ Lyrics (can't comment on the quality of a musical score, though!)
2. Short stories
3. Articles
4. Book Chapters
5. Scripts

Timeframe

I should be able to get to your work within 4-5 days normally. If I'm really busy that week, then it may take longer.

Reviews and Requesting

    -If there's anything specific you would like me to comment on, feel free to mention it in your request. Otherwise, I generally go over themes, imagery, word choices and structure for poetry and themes (if any are significant), imagery, plot, characterisation and structure for stories. For articles, I could comment on the general style, as well as offer suggestions on persuasion and arguments.

Sample Reviews
1. Poems/ Lyrics (can't comment on the quality of a musical score, though!)
2. Short stories
3. Articles
4. Book Chapters
5. Scripts

Happily awaiting your requests
Lim
Last edited by Liminality on Sun Aug 29, 2021 1:05 pm, edited 2 times in total.
  





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Sun Jan 03, 2021 3:10 am
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Liminality says...



Well bumping this thread just to say that I'm happy to review all kinds of works. Forgot to list it, but I'll include visual art as well (I'm no expert, but I'll try my best!). Preferably give a work that's still in the Green Room - I'd love to contribute to the site-wide effort to conquer the Green Room this year :D
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2021 1:24 am
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QuoolQuo says...



Hiya, I was wondering if you'd be able to review two short stories of mine?
I've been thinking of submitting them to a magazine so all honest criticisms would be welcome :)

Song of a Muse

Dionysus
  





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Tue Jan 05, 2021 1:29 am
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QuoolQuo wrote:Hiya, I was wondering if you'd be able to review two short stories of mine?
I've been thinking of submitting them to a magazine so all honest criticisms would be welcome :)

Song of a Muse

Dionysus


Of course! :)
  





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Thu Jan 28, 2021 12:37 pm
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raindrops says...



Hi! I wrote a fantasy fiction short story, and I would like to have a review if it's got potential in terms of world building. Also, if possible, may you please give insights on how I wrote the exchange of words in my characters conversation? I was least confident when I write those parts, I think that the dialogue themselves are okay, but the in between sentences I put are still a bit forced on my part. I hope you'll have time for my request. Thanks!
  





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raindrops wrote:Hi! I wrote a fantasy fiction short story, and I would like to have a review if it's got potential in terms of world building. Also, if possible, may you please give insights on how I wrote the exchange of words in my characters conversation? I was least confident when I write those parts, I think that the dialogue themselves are okay, but the in between sentences I put are still a bit forced on my part. I hope you'll have time for my request. Thanks!


Sure, @raindrops! Is it the one called 'The Kingdom of Ingrid'? I'll be sure to get to it by the end of the week. :D
  





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Thu Jan 28, 2021 12:46 pm
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Yes, haha. Sorry I forgot to put the link. Thank you in advance for the review. I'll be waiting uwu.
  





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Fri Mar 26, 2021 4:59 am
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Hello. Can you pls review Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1 ? I would be thankful if you do
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Fri Mar 26, 2021 5:02 am
Liminality says...



ForeverYoung299 wrote:Hello. Can you pls review Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1 ? I would be thankful if you do


Sure! I'll try to get it done maybe next week? I'm a bit busy with coursework at the moment, but I should be able to review that by next Saturday latest. :D
  





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Fri Mar 26, 2021 5:03 am
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@Liminality thank you so much
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Thu May 20, 2021 5:09 pm
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Seirre says...



Hiya Lim! I would love a review from you on Finders, keepers; losers, weepers. <3
u make me go wat cuz u so wat n u can always go what around u watcha

--SpiritedWolfe


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Thu May 20, 2021 11:15 pm
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Liminality says...



whatchamacallit wrote:Hiya Lim! I would love a review from you on Finders, keepers; losers, weepers. <3


Of course! I should be able to get that done by the middle of next week. :D
  





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Tue Aug 24, 2021 3:10 pm
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IamI says...



Hi! I saw your post and I thought I'd put in a request. I was wondering if you could review my new set of fairy tales, Fairy Tales: 7-9
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Tue Aug 24, 2021 3:37 pm
Liminality says...



@IamI Of course! I'll review those sometime this week. :D
  








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