QuoolQuo wrote:Hiya, I was wondering if you'd be able to review two short stories of mine? I've been thinking of submitting them to a magazine so all honest criticisms would be welcome Song of a MuseDionysus
raindrops wrote:Hi! I wrote a fantasy fiction short story, and I would like to have a review if it's got potential in terms of world building. Also, if possible, may you please give insights on how I wrote the exchange of words in my characters conversation? I was least confident when I write those parts, I think that the dialogue themselves are okay, but the in between sentences I put are still a bit forced on my part. I hope you'll have time for my request. Thanks!
ForeverYoung299 wrote:Hello. Can you pls review Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1 ? I would be thankful if you do
whatchamacallit wrote:Hiya Lim! I would love a review from you on Finders, keepers; losers, weepers. <3
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