Young Writers Society

Okay, thanks!

could you review we all walk upsidedown ?

Hey!

If you are up for it, I would really appreciate it if you could review my short novella The Old Man And The Boy. It has 8 parts and is a rather simple story.

Here's the link for the first part!

The Old Man And The Boy 1

If you are interested, I can send you the rest of the links or you can just find it there.

Let me know!

@queenshadowgem Sure thing! I'll try to get to that before next week.

@RandomTalks I could! Might take quite a bit longer though, but I hope I can get through all that during RevMo. Looks like an interesting story

Hi! Could you review my last two chapters? Fool Without A Master (Chapter 3 Part 2) and the next one. Or just the last if you can only do one.

Sure @MissGangamash! I'll try to get those reviewed by maybe next week.

Hey Lim!

I would love to get some constructive feedback on this poem the inevitable. It already has some sweet reviews but I was hoping for something that would help in improvising.

@Hkumar I've just reviewed that piece! And @MissGangamash I'll get to the chapter after that one soonish!

@MissGangamash Just wanted to let you know that I've been really busy lately and I'm not sure if I can get to that second chapter :c Really sorry about that. Hopefully when things settle down after NaNo, I can swing by and review your later chapters or something else that needs reviewing?

Liminality wrote:@MissGangamash Just wanted to let you know that I've been really busy lately and I'm not sure if I can get to that second chapter :c Really sorry about that. Hopefully when things settle down after NaNo, I can swing by and review your later chapters or something else that needs reviewing?

That's fine, no problem! Whenever you can, just read the latest I've uploaded

I'm not sure if this is still open, but I was wondering if you could check out this novel I've been working on? It's not finished yet, but I'm trying my best to update it consistently. The more feedback I get on it the better I can pinpoint whether it's something worth turning into a full on novel series. Let me know if you're interested, or if not I completely understand.

Eclipse: Chapter 1

Hi @RealSadhours296! I've read the content warnings and unfortunately I don't think I'd be comfortable giving a very thorough review of this work. I do hope you'll manage to get more reviews on it from some other YWS-ers though!

It's no problem! Thank you for considering it! ^v^

Hi Liminality! I saw that this was open so I have arrived with another request! I wrote this short story back in February and received a few good reviews. But I am thinking of submitting this to a magazine, so I would really appreciate it if you could review it for me?

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