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Hey there :), could you please review my short poem, The silent struggle? Thanks!




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Hello!

Could you give me some constructive critism on the content of this story, the writing format and style?

This is the story: Victim or Killer?




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@Rinisha - sure! I'll have that done by the end of the week :)
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@Rinisha I've sent in the review!
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hey Lim! i'd love to get a review on this poem: !(just a #)
there's no rush; i'd be happy to get feedback on it anytime haha ^^
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hey hey! could you review my work age gap? if you'd like to, ofc.
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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@herbalhour Hi herb! Thanks for requesting a review from me! I normally don't review works that are very personal to the author (because I feel my reviewing style is not suitable for that), and based on what I've read in your work this might potentially fit into that category? If so, I'd be happy to review a different work of yours. c:
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i see i see hrmmm *big thinky face* could you perhaps review my 3rd collection?
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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@herbalhour Yep, I can review those poems for you! :D
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Hello! If you have time, could you review my work One Day? if not that's totally fine

It's like a stream of consciousness prose poem thingy
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[Gengar! :D they/them]
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@GengarIsBestBoy Hi Gengar! If you're looking for critique of imagery, word choices and structure plus an analysis of themes, I can definitely give a review of that poem along those lines c: Just to confirm is that what you're looking for?
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@Liminality yeah!
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Hey Lim, I'd love a review on this poem: Cloud Members

Since poetry is not my specialty, I'd like to know how I can improve, if I'm on the right track already and what you think is behind the poem.

[This is not a personal poem, this is pure fiction, so don't worry about writing constructive critism. I'm open for all suggestions. XD]




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@GengarIsBestBoy Cool, I'll try to get that review in this week!

@AmayaStatham Sure, I'd definitely be willing to review that!
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