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Sure @RandomTalks! I'll get to that latest by Saturday (might even be able to review it today) :D
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Hi Lim

I'd really thankful if you would review my poem: Born A Girl
It's been in the green room for a few days now, it's a rant I guess and a little violent so just tell me if you'd rather not.

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Hi @lehmanf! Sorry, but as my intro post in the WRFF thread says, this isn't really in my area of expertise ^^'. Maybe you could ask someone else or post it in the General Request Repository? I hope you manage to find a reviewer for it soon!
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No need to worry, Lim.

I'll try and find someone else to review, quickly I hope. One question if that's alright. I'm a tiny bit confused where you specify this type of work isn't your expertise. Are you classifying it as no. 2: "Works that dig really deep into mental health topics"
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@lehmanf Yup, since it sort of gets into descriptions of self-harm and seems to be about a very personal topic. I just don't feel comfortable reviewing stuff like that because my reviewing style tends to be very academic/ style-focused and I think it would be insensitive of me to review something of that topic in the way I usually do. I hope you understand.
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That actually makes perfect sense. Thank you for letting me know why.
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Hi hi, please review my short story.


Title: The AI war
Genre: Science fiction, Tech



this is suitable for you to review! Please do. Thanks!




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@Mika Honeydew Thanks for the request - I've reviewed that piece!
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Hi Lim! Can you please review my story you? I hope you enjoy it as well. Thank you!
"People say they need freedom, but in fact, nobody wants freedom."
- akutagawa ryunosuke


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Gotcha, @jisrahinav! I've reviewed that story.
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Hey Liminality! I was hoping you could drop a review on my story Burning? Not really looking for grammar/punctuation help-unless its a consistent issue-so if you could say what you think about my storytelling and imagery that would be great! Thank you in advance!
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Hey @Overwatchful! I'll try to get to your request by the end of the week :D
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hey , ,I am not sure if you are still open to reviewing request but hope you can review my poem

WHAT is youth ?

I don't know how to add the link.




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Hey @yamatri! I can review that poem. You can usually add links to works by just copying and pasting the url of the work.
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