You Know You Want Some [re-opened]

There you go!

Thanks so much, Demeter, for the review!

This one's realistic, adventure-ish fiction. It's the first thousand or so words of a short story.
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Some of the odd details will be explained later on in the story, so odd details=will make sense later. If you want to read more of it, anyway.
cheers!
--Voxina

It's done now – sorry it took a while!

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Could you please review this? Its lyrics. My first attempt.

Demi darling, care to review a poem for me? post489350.html#489350

It could potentially be entered, after much revision, to the Journal, if people like it. I'm terrible at judging the quality of my own work. But hey, that's what reviews are for, no?

Please let me know if I can return the favor!!!!! Just post in my 'review for food' thread. xD

Many thanks dear.


-Adna

You are both done.

That means... no queue, of course!

If you could review this poem, that'd be great but I was also wondering if you do lyrics? If not don't worry, I'm sure someone will review it in time. I'm just impatient. Anyway, here's my poem, Titled Synchronicity: topic42164.html

It's done now!

Yeah, I do lyrics, too. I'm not great at them, but I'll still do them.

*goes to edit the first post*

I'll bite.

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It's super-short, so please, please critique it!

I've got cookies! *hands cookies and chocolate over* *hands over chocolate chips in a separate box*

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And here, have some macadamia and white chocolate cookies..

Thanks so much for the two reviews!

Would it be too much to ask for you to review "None Ya' Business"? It's "Other Poetry". Link's in my siggy.

will you review this please
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Genre: Romantic fiction
word count:1170ish

Please and thank you

Tiffany

I'll get it to it as soon as I can, but because I'm pretty busy these days, it may take a while... But I'll do it, I promise.

With that said, I close this thread temporarily. But only temporarily.