You Know You Want Some [re-opened]

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Demi, would it be okay if I asked you to review a poem I recently posted? ^-^ Here's the link.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51467.html

Thanks a bunches! You are too awesome. ^-^ *hands chocolate*


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It's done. :)
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Demi! If you wouldn't mind, when you have the time, could you take a look at this poem? I've let it settle a bit, so I'm definitely ready for a harsh critique, if you could :)

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I'm so happy you review lyrics. :)
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Could I please have a review on this:

topic51881.html

Its for a contest.
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Hey Demeter! Do you think you could review Into the Depths Chapter II here?

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Hey!
Could you possibly review and critique my story?
It's a fanfiction, but I think you'll like it.
When you're done, maybe you could do Part Two? I will send you the link over x

Here's Part One anyhow:
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All done at last!

Keep 'em coming, but please note a few things:

1) By posting here, you accept the fact that it may take a few days for you to receive the review, especially if there are people before you. But if you post here, the review will come.

2) Please don't post multiple links simultaneously. Give me one at a time, and when I'm done with that one, you may ask for more. It will be the best for everyone, trust me. If you, despite all this, post more than one link, I will only review one of them, not all.

Thanks. :)
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If you wouldn't mind, my dear.

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No queue. :)

(I think? If you've asked me for a review in some other media [chat or PM] and it seems I've forgotten about it, I'm sorry and please let me know so I can review it.)
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Hi Demi!

I need this reviewed before I can hand it in on Tuesday. Give me a hand please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53453.html

Thanks so much :smt001
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Hi, if it's not too much trouble, I'd like some help with this:

topic52481.html

Also, I really need name suggestions. If you're busy then don't worry about it :)

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*bump*
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*responding to bump*

Would you mind taking a look at this?

Thanks!

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Demi!!
Hi!!

Could you please help me with this one?
topic54012.html
It's called Bye For Now. part II


Thanks so much for the help.
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