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Hello everyone, would you like to take a look at my work and review it? Really needs help to review my first story and what you think about it... Thanks! :D

Here is the link : Prologue
Let's go on an Adventure!




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Hi everyone, looking for feedback on a short story I'm working on!

Yolk's on Me (1)
Yolk's on Me (2)




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Hey I would love if you review my new work name 'I don't remember'
Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!




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Hey, y'all! I have a short poem that I'd like reviewed, thhansk!

She is Mine

-Kendall
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@Vil
I tried going to your poem, but it's saying that "this work is currently unavailable." If you want others to review it, you'll need to set it as "public" and not "private." Hope this helps. :)
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Hey everyone!

I’m about an hour old here haha!


I would be thrilled if you could take the time to check out my story about international urban legends! Mild language but suitable for people 13+ but this site is generally 13+...

Thanks so much!
Link is here! Prologue - Hanako-San




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I am requesting a review on my chapter 1 The commission.




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Hey y'all! I'd love it if someone could review my poem, Hospitality!




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Mi poema, En Solamente Mi, no spanish required. Por favor
Gracias 🙏
God, girl, adventure




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I've started a new Star Wars fanfic that I'd love to get out of the Green Room.

Star Wars: Episode 4: The Rise of Maul (Part 1)
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.




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Can I get a review for my short story/prose poem called bitter sweet eternity?

Bittersweet Eternity

I need more opinions, i thrive on feedback.




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