General Request Repository

Kale · 2015-07-23T03:22:16Z

Welcome to the General Request Repository This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means that you may get more than four reviews in one go, be warned: There is no guarantee that you will get reviews. As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow: For Requesters : Only one open request at a time. A request is considered open if it is the last post in the thread. In other words, do not double-post . If you would like to request reviews on a different work and your post is the last one in the thread, edit your post to update it . Remember to include a link to the work you want reviewed. If you make your work easy to get to, you're more likely to get reviews. Also, be sure to thank your reviewers for reviewing , even if you don't agree with what they said in their review. For Reviewers : Please Like the posts of any requests you fill . Good luck, and may the reviewers be kind to you.

dm74

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Points 319

Reviews 35

Sat Mar 16, 2024 10:15 pm

dm74 says... · Sat Mar 16, 2024 10:15 pm

Hi! I wrote a short story about true events I went through recently. It's a short story with poems intertwined into the narrative. I would love if more people could read and review it. Please and thank you!

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MothNBone

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Points 22080

Reviews 208

Sun Mar 24, 2024 5:12 pm

MothNBone says... · Sun Mar 24, 2024 5:12 pm

Hello Hello, I am here to ask for feedback for a poem I might publish in a litmag or journal. It involves both Shakespeare and strong language, so do keep that in mind but I am excited to see what you all think.

Ophelia Is Choking.

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ThekingsAdvisor

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Points 48

Reviews 23

Sat Mar 30, 2024 12:49 pm

ThekingsAdvisor says... · Sat Mar 30, 2024 12:49 pm

hello i would like a review for my first-ever short story, Diamonds fell from the sky(I don't know how to make it into a link, can someone help me on this). Thank you

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MothNBone

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Points 22080

Reviews 208

Sat Mar 30, 2024 3:30 pm

MothNBone says... · Sat Mar 30, 2024 3:30 pm

ThekingsAdvisor wrote:hello i would like a review for my first-ever short story, Diamonds fell from the sky(I don't know how to make it into a link, can someone help me on this). Thank you

I am sorry if this is against the rules (let me know so I can delete it) but I totally could if you wouldn't mind giving a look at my poem!

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IcyFlame

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Points 187518

Reviews 1657

Tue Apr 02, 2024 9:45 am

IcyFlame says... · Tue Apr 02, 2024 9:45 am

@ThekingsAdvisor if you just copy and paste the page url into your post it should work fine!

Diamonds fell from the sky

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Horisun

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Points 7580

Reviews 483

Tue Apr 16, 2024 8:52 pm

Horisun says... · Tue Apr 16, 2024 8:52 pm

Howdy! I’d love to get a review on chapter seven of my novel. It’s been chilling in the Green Room for a while. If you could read the prior chapters beforehand, that would be amazing, but not at all necessary. Thanks in advance!

Here’s the link -> The Witch of the Rotten Borough, Chapter Seven, Part One

She/Her

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IcyFlame

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Points 187518

Reviews 1657

Wed Apr 17, 2024 2:59 pm

IcyFlame says... · Wed Apr 17, 2024 2:59 pm

@Horisun have you got a short summary of what's happened so far? I'm not sure I can commit to reading the whole thing, but might get a chance to read this specific part and would love to be a bit more informed so I can actually be useful!

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Fern

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Points 524

Reviews 32

Wed Apr 17, 2024 8:55 pm

Fern says... · Wed Apr 17, 2024 8:55 pm

Hey all! Would love it if anyone could give some input on my poem, The Loud Silence. (I know, I know, just give it a try!) Plus it is currently in the green room, I think, so you'd get extra points

(but don't review it just for that!). The Loud Silence

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off. Sorry for the inconvenience.

WAIT.

Spoiler

theydon'tloveyoulikeiloveyou-

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Horisun

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Points 7580

Reviews 483

Wed Apr 17, 2024 11:25 pm

Horisun says... · Wed Apr 17, 2024 11:25 pm

@IcyFlame, of course! I'll try to keep it brief.

Spoiler

A dragon has settled in a town called Monsbury, and a young girl has gone missing. A "Magic Practitioner," Jo, and her assistant, Oscar, have been sent to kill the monster with the help of the town's residents. They are accompanied by Angelique, the missing kids older sister.

Some additional exposition: a "Magic Practitioner" in this world is basically a wizard. The setting is sort of late-1800s-esque. They need to hike up "King Mountain," also known as "Fotia," to reach the dragon.

Thanks a lot for the offer! If you have any other questions, let me know : )

She/Her

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HildeMint

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Points 90

Reviews 12

Mon May 13, 2024 1:45 am

HildeMint says... · Mon May 13, 2024 1:45 am

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Last edited by HildeMint on Fri Jun 07, 2024 3:18 am, edited 1 time in total.

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HildeMint

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Points 90

Reviews 12

Fri Jun 07, 2024 3:16 am

HildeMint says... · Fri Jun 07, 2024 3:16 am

My marvel Loki fic As the Crow Flies just needs one more review until its out of the green room, and im waiting for that until i post the next chapter, please review <3

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WinnyWriter

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Points 13534

Reviews 263

Sat Oct 12, 2024 7:04 pm

WinnyWriter says... · Sat Oct 12, 2024 7:04 pm

Anyone want to review my two chapters (3 parts) in my story To Paxaria? Even if you just want to review one part of it, I'd appreciate that!

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Bezro

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Points 0

Reviews 3

Mon Oct 14, 2024 9:27 pm

Bezro says... · Mon Oct 14, 2024 9:27 pm

I would enjoy reading a few critical reviews on my poem, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. One More Drink

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EsmerayaRose

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Points 94

Reviews 46

Tue Nov 05, 2024 2:24 pm

EsmerayaRose says... · Tue Nov 05, 2024 2:24 pm

Yes That's Me Part 2

I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~
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AverageIsekaiFan

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Points 531

Reviews 14

Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:28 am

AverageIsekaiFan says... · Wed Dec 04, 2024 1:28 am

HI, I'm new to writing, new to YWS, lots of new. I'd like some help regarding my first ever work here, the genres are Fantasy and Adventure. If you're interested, please do pay a visit, thanks a lot!
The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter One

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