General Request Repository

Kale · 2015-07-23T03:22:16Z

Welcome to the General Request Repository This is the place to make general review requests, and also the place to which general request threads are banished. While requesting here means that you may get more than four reviews in one go, be warned: There is no guarantee that you will get reviews. As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow: For Requesters : Only one open request at a time. A request is considered open if it is the last post in the thread. In other words, do not double-post . If you would like to request reviews on a different work and your post is the last one in the thread, edit your post to update it . Remember to include a link to the work you want reviewed. If you make your work easy to get to, you're more likely to get reviews. Also, be sure to thank your reviewers for reviewing , even if you don't agree with what they said in their review. For Reviewers : Please Like the posts of any requests you fill . Good luck, and may the reviewers be kind to you.

Liminality

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Points 61573

Reviews 623

Mon Jul 13, 2020 4:16 am

Liminality says... · Mon Jul 13, 2020 4:16 am

Hi there! I'd really appreciate it if someone could review this short story I've written: Phantoms

she/her

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Riverlight

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Points 0

Reviews 311

Fri Jul 17, 2020 6:56 pm

Riverlight says... · Fri Jul 17, 2020 6:56 pm

Thanks for the review!

The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.

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Riverlight

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Reviews 311

Sun Jul 19, 2020 9:53 pm

Riverlight says... · Sun Jul 19, 2020 9:53 pm

Hello there! I'd like someone to please review the fourth installment of my book "America Gone," which you an find here--

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vilnius/America-Gone--Chapter-Four-148114

The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.

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MaxaM

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Points 170

Reviews 13

Fri Aug 21, 2020 12:30 pm

MaxaM says... · Fri Aug 21, 2020 12:30 pm

Hello, i'd like to request a review for the most recent chapters of my novel, here's the link: Neighborhood Tales: The Tale of a Hedgehog (Chapters 3 and 4)

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Riverlight

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Points 0

Reviews 311

Mon Sep 07, 2020 10:27 pm

Riverlight says... · Mon Sep 07, 2020 10:27 pm

I know someone probably needs to complete some of their checklist challenges, so here you go! Have fun reading this depressing short story!

Honorine's Revenge
Warning-- Language, Implied Violence

The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.

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IamI

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Points 169

Reviews 44

Tue Sep 08, 2020 12:03 am

IamI says... · Tue Sep 08, 2020 12:03 am

I would appreciate some in depth reviews on my short story:

Between the Stones

And I would also appreciate an in depth review on this poem:

Dystopic Visions

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Rosewood

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Points 26

Reviews 64

Sat Sep 12, 2020 6:41 pm

Rosewood says... · Sat Sep 12, 2020 6:41 pm

Hi, no pressure, but I'd love some feedback for my story Wildfire, parts one and two!

Wildfires (Part 1)

Wildfire (Part 2)

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Riverlight

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Points 0

Reviews 311

Fri Sep 18, 2020 4:51 pm

Riverlight says... · Fri Sep 18, 2020 4:51 pm

A Father's Wish

The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.

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Rosewood

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Points 26

Reviews 64

Sat Sep 19, 2020 5:55 pm

Rosewood says... · Sat Sep 19, 2020 5:55 pm

I'm back here again!

Blood Sisters - Prologue (Jose)

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Riverlight

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Points 0

Reviews 311

Wed Sep 23, 2020 9:02 pm

Riverlight says... · Wed Sep 23, 2020 9:02 pm

I have a free style poem here--

Notorious RBG

The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.

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MissGangamash

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Points 304

Reviews 289

Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:22 pm

MissGangamash says... · Sun Oct 11, 2020 8:22 pm

Hey! I need help getting my last two chapters of my novel out of the green room. Can ya help me out? The Rage (Chapter 7)

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daniel.agranovsky

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Points 200

Reviews 0

Mon Oct 12, 2020 10:17 am

daniel.agranovsky says... · Mon Oct 12, 2020 10:17 am

Hi guys,

Just wrote and published my first novel :

https://www.amazon.com/Who-Lies-Will-No ... B08KNTJ3CN

Free with Kindle Unlimited.

Lots of positivie feedback from friends and family, but it would be great to get some unbiased opinion too.

Dan.

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yoshikrab

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Points 471

Reviews 141

Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:14 pm

yoshikrab says... · Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:14 pm

Hi! I would like a review for the first chapter of my first Novella here, The Legend of Ikor. It's on my profile.

Thanks!

they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap

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Rosewood

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Points 26

Reviews 64

Wed Oct 28, 2020 8:24 pm

Rosewood says... · Wed Oct 28, 2020 8:24 pm

Hey there... no pressure but I'd love some feedback for chapters three and four of my novel, Blood Sisters.

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

(If you're not just editing, but reviewing for content, I'd still love help with my other instillations!)

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Rosewood

Gender

Points 26

Reviews 64

Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:32 pm

Rosewood says... · Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:32 pm

Hi, I'm back again!

Blood Sisters - Chapter 5 (Rory)

And as always, if you're not just correcting grammar, but also for inconsistencies, plot holes, etc., I recommend reading the book so far.

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