Hi! I'd really like someone to have a read of the first 5 chapters of my novel The Light In Your Eye, which is a post-apocalypse-ish slice-of-life story. Just not sure quite where to go with it and I need to know if there's anything I can do to make it make more sense!! Thank you for your consideration, PM me if you're interested!
Hi there! My name is Juliet and I am in the midst of writing my first ever serious piece of literature, a novella called 'Thrice'! Below is the first chapter, 'Happy Birthday'. I am after any feedback including criticisms as in the end I hope to make this an ebook someone can pay to read (hopefully that's not too ambitious lol, let me know what you think!) Thank you so much for stopping by and have a beautiful day
Hiya, could someone please take a look at a scary story I'm working on? Any kind of feedback would be greatly appreciated. By the way, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Hey, looking for someone to beta-read the first two chapters of my fanfic, Face-to-Face. Preferably someone (remotely) familiar with the Boys universe.
Hello! I would love for reviews on my fairytale devotio! A warning that it is a little long (4.5k) and it has a bittersweet ending and themes of self-sacrifice. Thank you!
I'm looking for reviews for the start of my book, "The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth." I'd love it if you stayed for the whole read, but I'm really trying to perfect the Prologue and Chapter 1, so if you just want to post there, that'd be great too.
The book is Fantasy and Horror, with minor depictions of gore. As it goes on, there will be language and more intense violence.
I would be happy to return the favor for a review. Does anyone else have a grand fantasy novel they're working on?
I'm also new on YWS, and still have barely any idea how these dang forums work, so if I'm doing something wrong here, that's why. Excuse the newbie!
That is all. Thank you!
(Formerly RavenAkuma)
~ "Believe only half of what you see, and nothing that you hear." ~
Looking for a reviewer for my two/ three extracts of some fantasy books i'm writing. Not massively longwinded (about 5 minutes for each) and any feedback would be appreciated, but mainly on characters and writing style. Thanks!
