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Great job Rawan, especially for your first poem! I liked the emotional and philosophic undertones of this piece. Overall theme is really good! Just a few nitpicks that can be ...

Really really well done, Prezeling, I think we all have felt others try to make us conform and kill us from the inside out. Good piece, love the simplistic and ...

Great job Tennishead! Moral of your story was great, emotions were vivid and this was really relatable, as everyone has been close to success but then experienced failure. It was ...

Whew! That was really really really good! (Like the visual at the end BTW). I liked how you put your first stanza as both your first and last stanza. I ...

Wow, Nightcrawler, this is just amazing, amazing, amazing. I have no criticisms at all, only praise. You did everything right, you infused so much emotion into it to make it ...

Great job conveying the image of the boyfriend wondering, first, who hurt his girlfriend, but then finding out and being confused. Also, I really liked how you painted the image ...

Wow, Aley, this poem very good! Very deep and dark, yet honest as the teenager realizes he should stop pretending. This is so good and honestly I have very few ...

Hey there! Zanda here for a review! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It flows nicely, and as an avid lover of philosophy, I like how you related it to ...

Beautiful, Weymouth, this poem is astoundingly beautiful, and I can get what you mean when you say it was too personal to enter in that competition. Sometimes when you write ...

Great prose, ZoMa! The language used in this piece is certainly very eloquent! Some suggestions though--I think it takes a little bit away when you use too many adjectives and ...

Happy review day!!! Tigerlilly--this is certainly a piece which holds much emotional depth and I like how it is more realistic and therefore has a dark side to it. You ...

It's review day!!! Solid essay, Monkasourous. You follow the 5 paragraph structure very well, and your points are generally quite solid. However, you may consider cutting out some extraneous material ...

Happy review day!!! Zanda here for a review! Wow Tay, this is so so good! Could never write this when I was 12, and even now, you are way better ...

Another newbie reviewing!!! This is so so so good!!!! It flows very, very well and the mysterious nature of the poem is very well conveyed. Honestly I can't really say ...

Great great great writing!!! Certainly have a real poet here!!! Love love love the way that you say things twice sometimes like "sleeping, sleeping", "dreaming, dreaming" and "floating, floating". May