youngandclueless

Wow! This is a great poem! You have great diction, which is possibly the most important aspect in a piece of literature. I really love the last line in your ...

I must say that I really liked this poem. It seems very deep and personal, and it draws into its dark theme immediately. I really like the line, "How many ...

This was great! I just love it! See, most people don't understand why I write in my free time. And I never have really been able to put it into ...

Hello! I really liked you poem because it was so lighthearted and fun. I was short, interesting, and an enjoy read! I just wanted to tell you that you did ...

Wow! I must say I really loved this poem! I don't really understand what specifically about it, but I do know that I really loved the last line! It was ...

This poem wasn't bad, although I did find it confusing. "It burns through my soul with an everlasting light." That line suggest a powerful feeling, and the other lines that ...

This poem was amazing! It was so beautiful, and the words that you used to write it were just fabulous and set the mood for the poem quite clearly. The ...

Wow! I must say this is a great poem! I love the how you had the POV of a mentally unstable person, because it made to poem so much more ...

This is so great! I love this book series and I am so glad you wrote a poem about it. It is suck a great story and just reading this ...

Great story! It was cute and was fun to read, although I feel like maybe you could have tweaked the ending. "WE"RE ALL GONNA DIE!" is a pretty big statement ...

This was great! I really thought your presence was strong in the poem. I could feel that what you write, you believe in. You words were really confident and made ...

Wow! That was a great story! It picked up right off the bat, with some dark humor that immediately caught my attention and made me want to read more of ...

This was a really great story. It felt all dark and dangerous at first, and it continues like that through out the whole thing, but the end made me just ...

Your story was really good, but I think that you should develop the characters some more. Every single thing that a character does is powered by specific motivation. And I ...

This is a great poem! It is so simple and elegant at the same time. The writing is truly beautiful and you have a gift with similes. The poem did ...