Young Writers Society

Haha, reading this, I found the perspective adorable! You conveyed the innocence of the character well. However, there are a few places where the meaning of what you were trying to say wasn't quite clear. Like:
“Each syllable pronounced and with care and exactness. A sweet, flowery smile sprang onto the kindergarten teachers face. “That is exactly how long our school year will be! This will be so exciting, children!”
Shouldn't it be, "SHE pronounced each syllable WITH care and exactness"? Also, you might want to add punctuation to when you write "kindergarten teachers." It should be "teacher's." And, as Change has already pointed out, you should cut out the "and" before "with care and exactness."
Then there's:
"A sharp gasp, indicating that she has probably taken the news quite hard. There’s hyperventilation and finally the sobs."
It should either be: "She gave a sharp gasp, indicating..." or "A sharp gasp indicates..."
Finally:
"“WE’RE ALL GONNA DIE!” is screamed."
Shouldn't it be, " "WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!" she screams."?
The ending made me laugh. Protective suits? I didn't know Kindergarten could be sci-fiction-y. I was reading this right now, and just went all shrilly: "this is so cute!" My friend thought I'd finally cracked. Hehe.
I don't get your title though. How is it a Prose poem? I mean... aren't poems a little different? With line breaks and such?
But I love this story anyway!
Keep writing!
~Pompadour

Hey! Review time

Each syllable pronounced and with care and exactness. A sweet, flowery smile sprang onto the my kindergarten teacher's face.

A sharp gasp, indicating that she has probably taken the news quite hard.

Great story! It was cute and was fun to read, although I feel like maybe you could have tweaked the ending. "WE"RE ALL GONNA DIE!" is a pretty big statement for a kindergartener, and I think that you could have used it to your advantage. You could use it to prove a point or enforce a deep message on the readers.

But that is just a suggestion, and you don't even need to adjust it if you don't want to! It is a great story and I really did laugh at the end!

Well done.

Hey, this is Rylee for a review.
This is a really cute story, but there were a couple things that needed changing. On the bright side, though, it's mostly just small clean-up things.
Again, this was a really cute STORY. I didn't really think it was a prose poem, because I've always thought of prose poetry as just poetry in a more prose-like form. (??) I'm not a hundred percent sure how to describe it, but to me it's rather like taking poetic devices and applying them to prose, using imagery and poetic language to describe something or to convey something.
I hope this helped: if not, PM me and I'll find some examples for you. Once again, so cute.

Keep Writing--
--Rylee

Hahahaha!!! *sigh* That was really good. I wasn't sure what you meant by 'prose poem', but after reading this, I don't care. That was really funny. Your words were really well-chosen, and you convey your message quite clearly. Not much to say except good job and keep it up!