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Hi @1234! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your requested review! Rossy is a perfect girl for class monitoring. She has a power which can be justifiably called extramundane. No, ...

Why, hello there @frogforest! I saw your recent activity on the Newbies Club , and I stumbled upon this work, so I decided to review it! The hardest part of ...

Hi @Tanishka! Beautiful poem! Hands,strickingly cold To one’s eyes lies are told. In our dying breath and hopes, Even the wind goes. I like your use of rhyme between "eyes" ...

Hey Lunar! I'm bacc for my first review since review day! Awesome poem! This is certainly very dramatic and powerful! Good work! I’m drowned by everything around, like I’m engulfed ...

Hi @Iforgot! I'm Yoshi and I'll be here for your review! First off, this is a nice, short poem. Your grammar and language applications are extraordinary in here. Summer is ...

Hey Olivia! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! Welcome to YWS! First off, this poem has a good theme-- your gecko. Your word choice is very simple, if ...

Hey @quitecontrary! I'm Yoshi and I'm here for your review! (By the way, I love your username :)))) Dreams don’t follow straight paths. They curve and grow, Recklessly colliding with ...

Sup! How's it going, jay? Well, in case you don't remember me (HAHA I AM SOOOOO MEMORABLE, RIGHT :PPPP), I'm Yoshi, and I'm here for your review! Let's get started, ...

Wow! This is truly a heartfelt piece of writing! I love it! You show intense emotion throughout your writing. Good job! First off, I'm Yoshi, and welcome to YWS, @EquinoxEternity! ...

Hello, @REDBLUESTARFISH! I'm Yoshi, and I'll be here for your review on this wonderful poem! First off, it seems like this poem is a bit short. I don't know if ...

Hi @Sunflowerdemon3712! I'm Yoshi and I'll be here to review for you! I quickly text my mom and dash after Lily. I caught up to her quickly because I had ...

Hi Andrew! I'm here to review your work called "What love feels like". Great work! Your sentence structure, grammatical use, word choice, and technical paragraph structure are all excellent! OKAY ...

I SHALL REVIEW THIS WONDERFUL CHAPTER. YAYYYY DRAGONS!!!!!! Jerica wasn’t sure what woke her. Her gut felt like a cat was wrapped around her intestines purring – only, instead of ...

I haven't read the rest of your novel, so I'll stick mostly to technical reviewing. Nevertheless, I love the chapter even without background information! James swayed where he was sitting, ...

Hey lum and gem! Love the poem! Kudos to you! Anyways, let's get started on the review. i have one safe haven here it's calming and secluded Although this is ...