This poem was so short yet was still beautiful. I feel like I read so many poems with crazy long imagery and it was definitely a change of pace reading the simplicity of yours. I like how "my friend is eternal" is bolded and draws the eyes of the reader right to it. I also enjoyed how vague the opening lines were, it kept me wanting to read on. This piece is relatable and simple and can very easily be applied to anyone's life.
Points: 170
Reviews: 2
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