Young Writers Society

Makes me even more curious about if I'm aromantic because the only thing that has me responding this way is stubing my toe.

Beautiful.Amazing.Stunning.Just Superb.I can’t even begin to describe how incredibly life-changing this poem was to me.The simple yet profound words “AAAHAHA” shook me to my very core.I shed a tear while reading this and figured out the meaning of life just by taking the time out of my uneventful day to read this gorgeous work of art.I hope that you will have a fabulous day and night.

This is a timeless piece of art that resonates across the ages. Truly brilliant.

relatable. this is art

Brava

Me: Reads the post on your wall and comes here expecting some deep, philosophical poem.

Then I see this.

Me: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

This is pure genius. Keep writing.

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Hey, MaybeAndrew.

I wasn't sure exactly what I was expecting from this! I have no suggestions. No critiques or anything. This was perfectly well written and was comedic. This is definitely what I imagine love would feel like.

Signed,

Pineapple

hello. i am here again to review your work after your another work- how to take notes like a god. so,here, I am gonna use your technique to show you how your work was.

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it was an enjoyable read. please do continue with your work.

Hello Andrew! Hannah here for a quick review.

Grows:
I think maybe you should have separated it out into stanzas to express that "Roller coaster" effect. Also, the H's are normally at the end rather than in the middle scattered everywhere.
Glows:
LOL this is hilarious and true and it makes me want to scream!

A perfect encapsulation.
Beautifully constructed and executed.

Hey it’s me again.
And it’s you again, leading me on with the title.
Only critique, for some reason, on mobile, I can’t read your full work. And I’m dying to get to the end. On the other hand there's something poetic about how it trails off the edge of the screen into infinity. Excellent work as always gg

What a fantastic work. I love to the use of A. It really brings the feeling and emotion to life. Please do continue with your works )

Its a poetic genius. Absolutely loved the poem.

this poem is the best i've ever read. it is so thoughtful and provacative. LOL!

OH MY GOODNESS THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL 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Oh wow its just the greatest poem ever created
LOL
A+ plus for this work lol
XD
'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH''

A plus.

Heylo Andrew! (maybe). This is a review of your emotional poem, "What love feels like"

First of all, I loved the straight A's you gave the poem. It really is what love feels like. Just in perfect harmony yet very intriguing. Really scary, yet fun... yet scary.

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AAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Exactly.

Hi there MaybeAndrew! I'm here for a review on this riveting, deeply thought-provoking poem of yours.

I think this poem concisely conveys the intense emotions that accompany love. Your use of all-caps, along with your choice to not use any punctuation, work together to portray the extremity of the narrator's feelings. I also enjoyed the fact that you employed not only the letter "A", a very harsh vowel, but also the letter "H", a much softer consonant. The contrast between these two sounds keeps the poem from becoming too harsh or repetitive.

I'm not sure if this was intentional, but in some sections of the poem it almost sounds as though the narrator is laughing? For example, towards the middle of the poem:

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Hi Andrew! I'm here to review your work called "What love feels like". Great work! Your sentence structure, grammatical use, word choice, and technical paragraph structure are all excellent!

OKAY THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE BEST LITERARY WORK EVER POSTED

(there. that's my review)

Anyways, don't we all feel that way? Love is basically the pain generator no matter how sugar-coated it is. We all experiences issues romantically at some point in life and it's hard to contain a scream. Even though you seem to have intended this to be a humorous work, I feel it has a deeper intent to it. Joke-wise, you did an excellent job. Serious-wise, it gives the reader something to think about.

Anyways, I hope you were satisfied with this review! (I mean, how did I even write such a long review on such a short work?)

-yoshi