writingmyheartout

it was good, there is one line "and the youngest are smart " that line just doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem. Other than t hat ...

Well I liked the imagery, but it was a little repetitive BUt all in all a goood poem. I think it had an interesting message. And it made you think, ...

I really liked it, it had some great imagery. And the descriptions were amazing. Not only was it beautiful, but it also made yo think a little about the message, ...

I loved it!!! Occasionly on Saturday's I'll watch My Little Pony. xD But I think it was good, although she is DeRpY so should she be called "fair maiden"? Either ...

Well I liked it, but it was very hard to read it as it was just a giant peice of text. I would love to read the next one, but ...

Wow, that was really good. I don't like to fabricate reviews to give people wrong ideas, but I really did like it. The format was great. (especially since in all ...

Ok so I really liked it, but periods would help the reader understand the flow of the poem. Because I was reading it out loud to understand the rythm and ...

Hi! I think it's nice writing, but the rhyme scheme I'm assuming you were trying to have doesn't happen in the first stanza. It was a simple peice with simple ...

I really liked the format of this poem, it made it more interesting and a better read. It made me think and reflect a lot about about my own life ...

I liked the poem, but you should figure out the tense that you are trying to use. Because that got confusing in the first stanza. But really that iswhat I ...

This is a poem, right? I know YWS messing up the spacing and everything, but there aren't any capitals or anything. I like it, it was beautiful. But you just ...

I'm confused, not that I didn't like it because I did. It's just that it seems to be going a lot of different places that maybe aren't as connected as ...

I liked it. It made me feel like I was the one falling in love. And I love how unncertain it seems in the beginning with "but there were so ...

I liked it, strong emotion. I think it was supposed to be "like" not "lile" at the beginning. But that was the only mistake I found. I just reviewed "For ...

Umm, I get the feeling this is directed at a specific person??? Just a guess, but does this really count as poetry. Especially with all the slang in it. Remember ...