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I really liked it, it had some great imagery. And the descriptions were amazing. Not only was it beautiful, but it also made yo think a little about the message, or theme, of the poem.
-Stephanie
Beautiful! This poems creates strong images in the reader's mind. That's what you'd like in a poem. No line seems to overflow, nice control over syllables, that clearly reflects some lyrical skills. Just feels right.
Shouldn't it be 'her'? But if you're talking about some other person, it's alright.
P.S : Age 15? You've got a spark in you, I can see it.