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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Day and Night

    Hi! Writervid here to review your work! First off, gorgeous imagery. I could vividly picture everything. You had great word choice as well, which helped with that. I feel like ...

    Sep 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Chasing butterflies

    Hi there! Writervid here to review your poem! First things first, you have beautiful imagery. I can clearly visualize every detail of the butterflies. This review is mainly for technical ...

    Sep 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue

    Hello! Writervid here with a review! Okay...this was...well...not what I expected. The themes here were a little dark and a little scary to think about. There is no afterlife? That ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: for Hatt

    Hi! Writervid here to review! My first thought when I read this was "awwwww" because this was such a sweet piece. From the introduction to the ending I found myself ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The dark between the days.

    Oh, gosh, this was gorgeous. Your wordplay here was magnificent--I honestly can't pick a favorite line. There are so many layers to this poem that I want to pick apart, ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Without Love

    Hello! I'm here to review (another one of your poems)! First of all--and this is totally arbitrary, but I love your quote at the hook thing at the top of ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodnight my Beloved

    Hello! I've been waiting for you to post a poem...*rubs hands together evilly*. Let's get this review started! (and this has been forever, sorry!) First of all, formatting. To create ...

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: 12:00

    Hello! I recently read and reviewed 12:01, and once I saw this pop up in the poetry section I couldn't resist. Very excited to review! Well, do I really have ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Other » Romantic, Romantic Re: Love Before The Counterrevolutionaries Came

    Hello, @cheaperpoetry! I'm here to review your work! First of all, your capitalization. In poetry it can make sense to not capitalize any of the work, but here with your ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: as if not enough

    Hellooo! Anna here, ready to review! Okay. I really, really like this. You have gorgeous imagery and descriptions as well as great grammar. Let's see if I can find anything ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Measurement

    Hello! Anna here, ready to review! I really like this (this is why I'm growing to love review day, I find all of these hidden gems that I didn't know ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: 12:01

    Hello! Anna here, ready to review! First of all, the 3/3 at the beginning makes me think that this is the third poem in a series of three poems. I'm ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Ironclaw Prologue Re-Write

    Hello! I'm here to review your work! :D Let's get started! So, I was a bit confused when the summary didn't stop, but the more I read the more I ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Art » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: explicitly nerves

    Hi! I'm here to do a review! Let's review your art, shall we? First of all, because of the word "fuckshit" I think you need to rate this poem at ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: count

    Hi! I'm here to review your work! Let's get started, shall we? This is a pretty simple poem. I like it. You just come out and say what we need ...

    Jan 31, 2016


Grief, I’ve learned, is really just love. It’s all the love you want to give, but cannot. All that unspent love gathers up in the corners of your eyes, the lump in your throat, and in that hollow part of your chest. Grief is just love with no place to go.
— Jamie Anderson