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Hi Horisun! This was a cute little story that I enjoyed reading! I feel like a lot of the meat of this is good, so a lot of this review ...

Hi! My name is Anna, and I'll be giving some grammar tips on your first paragraph! , I could tell she was beautiful. Not just beautiful. I squinted, cursing myself ...

Hi! Nice to meet you! I'm just going to leave a quick review here on your piece (I'm Anna). So, starting off, I'd like to say that I view poetry ...

Hello there! Writervid here to review! Okay, so the first thing I would like to do is talk to you about, not tour piece, but the meaning of a prologue. ...

Hi there! Writervid here to review! Again, I'm not the best at reviewing lyrics, so this will probably be short, but here goes! I really like your first verse. It ...

Hi there! Writervid here for a review! Okay, so I really, really like this poem. You hit imagery on the head right here with your descriptions of technology, a topic ...

Hello there! Writervid here to review! I really, really like the imagery you use here, especially the word choices you use to describe things. I've never seen the sun written ...

Hi! I came here from reading your comment on my wall saying that you had written a poem similar to mine, so I'm very excited to review this! (I started ...

Hello there! Writervid here to review! I don't review song lyrics much, so I'm afraid that this will be a rather short review. However, I hope that I can be ...

Hi there! Writervid here to review! So, I can tell you have a series of these poems based on the titles in the "Related Works" section. I might check some ...

Hello there! Writervid here for a review! Okay, so let's start out by looking at your punctuation. Not every line needs to end in a period (I know not every ...

Hello! Writervid here to review your work! Let's get started. at the end of the day i’m just a bitter asshole at least that’s how you see me and how ...

Hi! Writervid here for a review! First, love, love, love your poem. Reminds me of all the things I've lost and how much I keep searching for the same thing ...

Hi! Writervid here for a review! Wow. This poem, as short as it is, hit me hard. You nailed mood and tone, and I honestly loved that. I also really ...

Hi! Writervid here for a review! Everything technical here is fantastic--I love your rhyme scheme, your stanzas are separated, the spelling is good--so here I'll just focus on analysis. The ...