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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning?

    I like this poem alot! It is really fun and even though it is short the tone of it gets across easily, the annoyance of the morning. I like all ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No Excuse

    This poem is very beautiful. I like how you packed in an entire story and a lot of feeling into 15 words. I feel like the poem is so relatable ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Verse

    i like this poem a lot. i think it can really speak to all us poets in her. my only critics is that you may want to add some punctuation. ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: And now I just sit in silence

    Wow! This poem is very powerful. I like how the story of the voice slowly developed and subtly changed throughout the poem. I also liked the repetition. I think my ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Technology, Lyrical Re: Lame Game Boy

    I like the innocence of this poem and the victorious feeling it brings, but I think that you should fix the part "When the game did he beat. With an ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Just a Little Splash of Color

    I like this poem even though it lacks in length. I think that if you added more to it, use it as a base, you could create a really powerful ...

    Mar 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why don't you?

    I like this poem. I think that the short length of the poem fits really well with what you are saying here, just go out and enjoy night time for ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Culture Re: It's all so...realistic

    I disagree with Malooga. I think that any poetry is good depending on the feeling and emotion that is put into a poem. This poem is beautifully written and clearly ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Tall Tale

    I think that this poem shows how easily words can release pain and express emotion. Thank you for sharing this it is a beautiful and relatable piece to many. I ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Hell is empty

    This is a really intriguing peace of writing. I think that its interesting that it suggests that perhaps we are the devil. I like how that the three differently described ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Dip, Dip, Potato Chip.

    I like this poem because it reminds me a little bit of Shel Silverstein. I like the use of rhyming in the first 3 lines. This poem is really funny ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Land Where I Belong

    This poem is very well written. I like this stanza a lot: "Constant strife’s and wars, Has set the land ablaze. There’s no hint of remorse or guilt, Exposing how ...

    Mar 10, 2014


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