Morning?

I like this poem alot! It is really fun and even though it is short the tone of it gets across easily, the annoyance of the morning. I like all the slant rhymes because it is subtle but keeps a good flow to the poem! I also dont know if this was intentional but I like how your poem looks kind of likt the day how you have all day and then night and as soon as you think you are going to rest you have to get right up again.

This mad me laugh. It was very realistic though. I have to get up at 5 am everyday to go to school. It sucks a lot. I hate high school. Anyway, I liked the style of your poem. I liked how used lowercase letters to start every one of your lines, except for the first line that said 'Morning'. It made the poem work and brought out what you were talking about.

So, I empathize with you because I know how much it sucks to get up super early. Great job! Kudos to you! You have earned my stamp of approval. *stamps forehead with approval*

FANTABULOUS JOB! *claps*

This is such a funny poem! I think you could construct the stanzas a little better. The rhyming is what makes it really good and plus you can relate to this. I think you should make one about not being able to fall asleep(the opposite of this). Thanks for letting me read this!