wordsandwishes

This poem was epic! Seriously, it was like this crazy background story/ adventure into another world. And then you ended it with this big finally that lets the reader know ...

I get the impression that this poem was derived from a nightmare. It's certainly dark enough. And kind of creepy, but I guess that's the idea. Anyway, your imagery was ...

Wow, it's hard to believe you don't write poetry. I agree with tarameagan, you did a great job. The way you gave such mundane things a personality was awsome. I ...

I found this poem a little -almost imperceptibly-... Lacking. The flow was a bit bumpy and disrupted the meaning a bit. Not that this wasn't a good poem, which it ...

I agree with bobbywalker, it sounds very much like a child trying to break free from his/her mother's protection. To be like a summer breeze. And even though the poem ...

I really liked this poem, and I mean reaaaally liked it. But your cryptic use of metaphors hides the true meaning, a little too well. I mean, it's called dust ...

I loved this poem, it was pure emotion! Who cares about metaphorical imagery. This was an awsome expression of yourself and you should be proud. . I also like the ...

This was a somewhat dark poem. But it had a different mood than most , and I liked that. And I think part of what changed the mood and made ...

I like your meaning. It's deep and branches off into other meanings. - I'm assuming that's why people found it somewhat confusing-. Anyway, all of your technical stuff is good, ...

This poem used the art of metaphorical message writing very well. Your flow was flawless and your ending was powerful; Like the last strike of a hammer on a nail, ...

I really admire the plain truth in this poem. And the way you prolonged your poem to take your meaning further, in the sense that life goes on. I also ...

This was a pretty deep poem. And I know it takes guts to share your feelings, so I'd like to congratulate you on that. But...I feel that you could have ...

I think this poem addresses one of the most common things people try to do, race time. Some would even say that we're always racing it. Anyway, I liked the ...

Nice, simple, and straight to the point. I loved the uniqueness and the way you added that extra bit of meaning at the end , reminding "them" that their days ...

Wow, I absolutely loved this poem! The way you repeated lines in just the right spots tied the whole thing together. So even when I reached the last heartbreaking line ...