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Hello soundofmind, I'm here to review a little (: I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors. I'm not going to assume that the all lower case was a style ...

Hello, Adrian here for a review (: This story definitely is short but you clarified this extremely well and I don't really think you need to add any more to ...

hello pal! my name is Adrian and im here to review your work a little (: so right off the bat i notice the extreme lack of punctuation, which in ...

hello pal! my name is Adrian and im here to review your poem a little (: i loved the concept of this poem and you very clearly got across what ...

hello book princess, Adrian here for a review (: first off welcome to YWS! second OH MY GOD PANIC AT THE DISCO YES okay that out of the way TIME ...

hello E, Adrian here for a review. okay i just want to say, first and foremost this is an extremely interesting poem. i find it impressive that you wrote from ...

Hello Kara, Adrian here for a review (: before i start, tell your dad i said hello and that this poem is a masterpiece. thank. now heres the review. "I ...

Hello E.E, Adrian here for a review (: as you already know i really do like this poem. i think its very well written. the flow is very nice. you ...

HOWDY PAL ADRIAN HERE FOR A REVIEW (: its been a while since ive reviewed one of your poems, sorry about that btw. BU T this poem is very V ...

Hi Kara, Adrian here for a review (: okay so this was a super interesting piece and i really enjoyed it. i think you added so much depth to it ...

hello! Adrian here for a review (: first and foremost i want to thank you. with this piece you were able to put into words what i simply cannot, and ...

Hello E.E im here for a review (: seriously i love all the acrostic poems they're all so neat and GAH SO ORIGINAL IDK I REALLY LIKE THEM. but i ...

hello Adrian here for a review (: YESYESYESYESYESYESYES A HAIKU this poem hits home man, like i cant put into words how my heart felt when i read this honestly. ...

hello Adrian here for a quick little review (: your poem means a lot to me. i'm not saying that to just say that, i mean it. i feel it ...

Hello, Adrian here for a review i think that this poem was extremely well written! your flow was outstanding and i think you nailed! i am going to assume that ...